Probir Gupta Poet Choka

The Sphere In Trouble

We are in bad times
Army of violent clouds
Clashing fiercely in the sky
                 
With golden lashes
Beating rumbling monster drums
Deadly pandemonium 

Our wonderful sphere
Is lonely in trembling fear
Aylan, the child in ocean
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July 21, 2016
Syllable structure:5-7-7, 5-7-7, 5-7-7
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Sandra Haight July 24, 2016 at 5:36 PM Probir, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Sandra Probir Gupta July 25, 2016 at 12:24 AM Thank you ...

Alexis Y. July 24, 2016 at 3:23 PM Hi Probir, It's good to see you on the winner's list. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Probir Gupta July 25, 2016 at 12:25 AM Thanks Alexis ...

Jan Allison July 24, 2016 at 8:57 AM yes the world is in trouble Probir - great choka congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Probir Gupta July 25, 2016 at 12:26 AM Thanks Jan

Janis Medders Tobechi July 23, 2016 at 7:30 PM The world is surely in trouble, Probir. Well written and congratulations. Thanks for being in the contest. Probir Gupta July 24, 2016 at 4:06 AM Thank you very much Janis ...

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2016 at 2:51 PM filled with biting reality yet beautifully scribed, probir... keep up the good stuff!..huggs Probir Gupta July 22, 2016 at 5:55 AM Thank you ...

Eve Roper July 21, 2016 at 10:05 AM What a nice poem, Probir, the use of words descriptions to play a roll. I am going to have to try this form. Hugs Eve Probir Gupta July 21, 2016 at 10:20 AM Thank you Eve ...Love ... Probir ...

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 21, 2016 at 9:04 AM So nice sir:) Probir Gupta July 21, 2016 at 10:24 AM Thank you Madhu ...

Demetrios Trifiatis July 21, 2016 at 7:02 AM Sparkling gems of Choka inspiring with their poetic splendor dear friend, Probir. 7-7-7 Probir Gupta July 21, 2016 at 7:18 AM Thank you ... Regards ...