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The Sparrow

a humble brown bird chirping merrily at dawn none but a small girl enjoyed this gentle music far away she sadly flew leaving this tired cruel world to the silent house of God Dedicated to the ever vanishing Sparrows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of debbie, tahera
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:08:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem..I think its perfect. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/24/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your great big win in the Japanese contest my dear friend.. a super cool write from a super cool poetess ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:50:00 AM
APPLAUSE for this radiant gem , tahera.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:55:00 PM
tahera, this is sad and charming at the same time. A most interesting choka and well deserved win. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:25:00 PM
Many congrats Tahera on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your well deserved win in the contest of Debbie!---kashinath
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Date: 2/23/2011 1:34:00 AM
Yes Tahera sparrows are missing from every where.This is due to Mobile phones.Very nice dedication --enjoyed.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for the entry! why use "humble" twice when you have so few opportunities for IMAGES...think IMAGES dear.....Light & Love
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Date: 2/16/2011 11:09:00 PM
What a sad write yet also very touching, Tahera-- really liked your last 2 lines here...enjoy your week :)
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:20:00 PM
how you shift from the real to divine is amazing, tahera! best wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:14:00 PM
Tahera, this is a fine example of a choka poem. It is easy to read and delivers great descriptiveness.
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