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The Sparkles

THE SPARKLES The sparkles of your Eyes Ignited the passion in my Heart That burst into the flames of Love And consumed my very soul! © Demetrios Trifiatis 14 MAY 2013

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Therese Bacha

Date: 5/14/2013 10:51:00 PM

Frankly Demetrios, I don't think that you write poems so deep, beautiful, amazing, because you went to school and have a PHD, what you write comes out from the depth of your heart. Your poems speaks to us. Your poems lighten up our hearts. Keep going, Thank you. Love Terry xoxo a 7>>>> and a FAVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/15/2013 4:12:00 AM

My dearest, you are right! A poet is born! Degrees cannot teach anyone to become a poet just helps him understand poetry! Poetry is innate quality of the soul. I was writing poetry since primary school! Thank you though for your generous comment!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2013 3:44:00 PM

such beauty in this one Demetrios, love brings the prettiest of words on a poem, with love going around, Luv p.d.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 10:38:00 PM

Thank you P.D., yes, the pretty ladies certainly bring the prettiest of words on a poem and the prettiest of sentiments in the heart: love!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/14/2013 2:26:00 PM

Once again A love song. beautiful and romantic! You are definitely entangle in love. May your life shine with "Love" through out. love manel

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 2:46:00 PM

Life is not worth living without love! Thank you my dear friend for your comment and your feelings!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2013 10:02:00 AM

you made me flip!... short, sweet and superb.. me likes!..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 11:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Nette! Thanks for the huggs as well!

Heather Ober

Date: 5/14/2013 9:33:00 AM

Oh, I love the way this poem is set up! A very creative and clever take on the progression of love. Also, thank you so much for your comment on my poem "The Philosopher." I am so honoured that a Philosophy prof enjoyed it! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 11:48:00 AM

My dear Miss Heather, thank you for your comment. As far as your poem "Philosopher" is concerned is a masterpiece, especially if one sees it from inside the cave! I really congratulate you once more! You must be involved with philosophy to have such an understanding!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/14/2013 7:06:00 AM

Beautiful..enough said. BG

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 9:22:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/14/2013 5:52:00 AM

Yes, my wife's eyes are just like that my friend! They have the same effect on me whenever I look into them lovingly, they create a union between out souls that ignite, and as you said "burst into the flames of Love!" This is a masterful poem, I just loved reading this effective piece this morning! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 6:09:00 AM

My good friend you have to consider yourself blessed for having a wife like that! Treasure her! Thank you for your generous comments!