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the spare-row

...'wowza' again... a spare row of creatures take... their last step every minute of... time any where and become food... yesterday i saw a hawk take a... sparrow feeding in the front hedge... just a half hour ago another got nailed... while i watched so the mystery is gone... sparrows will land on your shoulder because... hawks avoid us and so we're predatory protection.... len

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Date: 4/28/2025 9:05:00 PM
splendid take on ' angry" birds...well done, sand
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Date: 4/29/2025 3:13:00 AM
thanks.....maybe they don't get angry just ticked off.....len
Date: 4/25/2025 10:27:00 AM
Oh wow! That's quite the sight! I guess it is commensalistic :)
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Date: 4/26/2025 4:19:00 PM
sure is common-alistic..........stan
Date: 4/24/2025 1:12:00 PM
Predators bite, eh Stanley, er Len?
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Date: 4/24/2025 3:24:00 PM
...yessiree.....often times ravens, crows, vultures are seen pecking at birds or animals along roads.....len

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