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The Space In-Between

It's the space in-between that gets me to thinking My spirits do rise and then get to sinking My mind starts to wonder and reality fades thoughts now run riot and won't do as they're bade! Possibilities seem endless an idyll to dream then reality wakes up and starts being mean! I give into doubts and feel myself sinking for it's the space in-between that gets me to thinking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 1:51:00 AM
I guess that space is where creativity reigns 7up again I always love reading your poems
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:00:00 PM
Hi Emma, I enjoyed this insightful verse. I love my spaces, leads me to places I never dreamed just like you say so well. Thanks for your visit and sweet comment.
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Date: 8/17/2011 11:09:00 AM
You express yourself very well Emma. From start to end, enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:34:00 PM
yes Emma reality can be mean and it is surely a big wake up call in life.. but u have elegantly created an escape with your lovely words luv..
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:29:00 AM
I really like how you ended it. Nice poem.
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