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The Soup Cops

Was my last poem too naughty, over the line Are the Soup Cops gonna give me a real big fine :) How far can we meander Is it restricted, such candor On a one to ten scale, mine's a minus nine

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Judith S

Date: 12/19/2017 3:19:00 PM

You definitely make me laugh!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/19/2017 4:52:00 PM

Then my mission is accomplished!!! YEE HAW!!! Lovesies, Jacko! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/17/2017 3:50:00 PM

A minus nine or a five//got to let those lim'riks thrive//Let 'em rip Jack//There's no keeping track//and no one gets out alive. MEANDER ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2017 8:17:00 PM

Well I've been churning these suckerd out for quite a while and still breathing!!! Maybe my days are numbered!!! CHEERS MY GOOD BUDDY!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/17/2017 9:24:00 AM

Well all I have to say is beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2017 8:11:00 PM

Not exactly siren sounding but we get the message!!! LOL xxx

Silent One

Date: 12/17/2017 7:44:00 AM

At Xmas Jack becomes a shepherd, protects his limericks like a leopard. As his words go ba baa, sirens sound nee naa. Goes in hiding, till he isnt censored! Sorry, but they are awful today!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2017 8:09:00 PM

My faithful Mi!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/17/2017 9:23:00 AM

Oh that's a good one!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2017 8:14:00 AM

Nay nay dear friend!!!! Not awful a bee mediocre!!! LOL Just kidding! Still love you! Awww...

Silent One

Date: 12/17/2017 7:35:00 AM

I dont think it was naughty at all... lol... Can you hear the sirens> Neee naa, neeee na....

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2017 8:12:00 AM

So that's your description of a siren... hmmm! Sorry my frustration is making a nasty dude! I'm really still this sweet guy you've always known and loved???