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The Soup

All those times she took out her tablecloth and spread it 'O so gently' kept me coming back. It was her soup I'd see; the celery bits I'd act. A broth to be tapped of oil not strewn. As thick as the sun but thin to the spoon. With bowls like skirts defending their space. On modest placemats marked for grace. Down splendored chairs of darkened walnut My eyes remember the meal; the moment. And on her face her smile and grace Remind me of a better place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 11/18/2014 2:14:00 PM
A splendid poem, Trevor. Great imagery. Simile and metaphor too. Good job of putting this together.
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thanks Cona. I wrote this about a girlfriend who had me over for soup. LOL For such a simple meal, she made me feel at home. Thanks for your kind words Cona.
Date: 1/4/2014 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations! It is a very nice piece of art!
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:03:00 AM
Sweet and tender imagery...congrats on being featured this week, Trevor! A pleasant and soothing write. Wishing you the best...Mikki
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Trevor
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Date: 3/28/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Trevor. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2009 3:28:00 PM
Trevor, this is the poem that was picked by me to read today of yours. Lots of memories in this bowl of soup I see. Splended writing. Love, carol
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