The Soup

All those times she took out her tablecloth and spread it
'O so gently'
kept me coming back.
It was her soup I'd see;
the celery bits I'd act.

A broth to be tapped
of oil not strewn.
As thick as the sun
but thin to the spoon.

With bowls like skirts
defending their space.
On modest placemats
marked for grace.

Down splendored chairs
of darkened walnut
My eyes remember
the meal; the moment.

And on her face
her smile and grace
Remind me of
a better place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Adams Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 2:14 PM
A splendid poem, Trevor. Great imagery. Simile and metaphor too. Good job of putting this together.
Mcleod Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Thanks Cona. I wrote this about a girlfriend who had me over for soup. LOL For such a simple meal, she made me feel at home. Thanks for your kind words Cona.
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January 4, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Congratulations! It is a very nice piece of art!
Mac Donald Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Sweet and tender imagery...congrats on being featured this week, Trevor! A pleasant and soothing write. Wishing you the best...Mikki
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Trevor
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March 28, 2011 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Trevor. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Trevor, this is the poem that was picked by me to read today of yours. Lots of memories in this bowl of soup I see. Splended writing. Love, carol
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