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The Soup

The Soup

Herald the song of the poet and poetess…
The muse, the art of words, chased across paper by pen. 
Not unlike a pirate and a princess, a hero and a queen.

My time here among those that fly, has been short. 
But and yet, (pause)…I am grateful to be here at all. 
The wings of some, full feathered, birds leave me knowing I will fall. 
I am unskilled and often feel light headed. 
Yet the chirping sounds, the longing calls, the very cooing utterances, 
of veterans and beginners all and as one…
lift my unsteady, unready wings ever higher, 
than I thought possible, to still breathe…at all!

Giants walk hard and angels pass lightly, 
both leave prints on our lives ever lasting. 
Comments on words, words on paper, 
dreams and fragments of tensile.

Thank you to the soup.

Ann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Connelly Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Ann this is truly touching. I love the line, "I am unskilled and often feel light headed." That's me everyday haha. To me that means you have your head above the clouds. Being light headed us a good poetic sign. It's either fight or flight or write time. The right time Ann. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. I do hope to read more of yours Ann. Thank you.
May Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:15 AM
Amazing poem Ann!! Well done!
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November 12, 2019 at 11:42 AM
High praise... thank you my friend. Blessing son your day. I love your work. Ann
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November 3, 2019 at 4:59 AM
I love your tender words! “Giants walk hard and angels pass lightly... Hugs...Kim
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November 12, 2019 at 11:42 AM
That is how I feel as i write among you... Ducking and weaving to understand the truth of why we are here... Hugs. Ann
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November 2, 2019 at 10:38 PM
i think you are very skilled and caring with your wonderful comments and therefore would be one of the ingredients that make soup special to begin with... soar high sweet Ann.... hugs :)
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November 12, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Prayers for your day... full of flowers... the kind that only grow in the high desert...blooming once for a day... yet spread apart, that there is never a day without color... God Bless YOU... Ann
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November 2, 2019 at 8:29 PM
you have a gift dear poet, let it soar without fear
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November 12, 2019 at 11:40 AM
All here are so kind. Blessing to you. Ann
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November 2, 2019 at 7:32 PM
This is very good, so I am with TS. Do NOT underestimate yourself, dear. Such a sweet song of poetry and gratitude.
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November 2, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Hugs butterfly...you came by. Flowers of every color..bright and cheerful... Ann
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November 2, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Don't underestimate yourself. You are a fantastic writer/poet
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November 2, 2019 at 6:23 PM
You are so kind. I have met so many excellent people here. It is a pleasure to turn my computer on and share a morning, with friends. Ann
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