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The Sound of the Stream

Stream at night sings softly age old music to quiet the cry of this day's little child lost while the west wind moans Restoring calm from chaos Flowing to tomorrow's promise Diluting the tears of the day's song Bathing the soul with the waters of hope

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Paul Holmes

Date: 6/30/2010 1:02:00 PM

This is so beautiful.

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/9/2010 3:53:00 PM

Hi Barbara, thanks for your great comments. I love your Etheree, it's very soothing, good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)

James Fraser

Date: 6/9/2010 3:25:00 PM

Barbara, delightful etheree. I can hear the sounds of the stream >> James

Date: 6/9/2010 10:02:00 AM

I really like the ending in this poem--something we all need to get us through the tough times. Nice use of alliteration to share your thoughts. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/8/2010 1:37:00 PM

Very expressive! Loved it! ~Tirzah~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2010 5:12:00 AM

Excellent work in this one...I can see and feel the scene...Keep the creative pen flowing ...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 6/7/2010 11:37:00 PM

Hi Bg it is a dessert of banana,caremel toffe,cream in a pastry case.Rgds Brian