The Sound of Rain

Gently close your eyes
And pay attention.
Wallow in the state of calmness
And mentally snip off
All tethers of here and now.
Escape to a blissful,
Uncharted no man's land.
Just listen attentively.
Hear that?
Ah, the sound of rain...

                         What could be more soothing?

Thousands of drums, 
Simultaneously beating;
Rain rattling the roof
To make your joyous spirit dance.
Take time to listen
To the sound of rain pelting the roof.
Relax and empty your mind.
Surrender to glorious serenity.
Explore your imagination 
And let it run wild.

                       What could be more enchanting?


Date written: 10/31/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gasun Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 7:08 PM
I love rain as much as sunshine. This is sooo beautiful. I love your poem my dear friend Edward. Congratulations on your second place win!. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
Ibeh Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Len:-)
Kauffman Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Edward, I love to "wallow" in the sound of rain especially at night as I pull the covers up tight. What a great word that truly describes the joy of the sound of rain. As an inveterate northwesterner rain was as much a part of life as breathing! Truly "what could be more enchanting?!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend. This is a definite fave for me and I will read it often as I pray for rain to end the drought in CA!!!
Ibeh Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 7:46 PM
I couldn't agree more about rain at night! Thank you very much for the lovely feedback, congrats, and fave, Sam:-) Most obliged..
Seeker Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Wow! A superb write indeed. Makes the rain come alive! Congratulations on your win, Edward
Ibeh Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Fowler Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Oh so beautiful Edward. Congratulations on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 8:56 AM
I really enjoyed reading this one. It was so nice to have a little rain the last couple of days because it has been so dry here up until that point for over a month. The sound of the drip-drops was soothing. Thanks for sharing this one today. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 10:08 AM
I couldn't agree more about the drip-drop sounds! Very soothing indeed! Thank you, Sara:-) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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