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The Song of My Heart

I heard someone singing your name My possessive soul travelled miles to find out who it is Tired, my body rested under a tree In the stillness of the air, I realised that the song is the beat of my heart.

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 9/4/2019 8:46:00 PM

Interesting reflection of the jealousy one can feel toward someone who is passionate about the one you love, only to find out that one is you.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/3/2019 9:29:00 PM

Wow! Very creative!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2019 11:50:00 AM

Lovely, lovely denouement, Swetha! ~ Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/2/2019 12:09:00 PM

Lovely poem - we have to be still to so that we can hear, we have to look so that we can see and we have to speak wisely when spoken to. I love the song is the beat of my heart - do we stop to hear our heart beat as often as we should? Wonderful poetic flow. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 3/2/2019 12:16:00 PM

When we listen to our heart, we get to know answers to many questions. Thanks a lot Jennifer :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/25/2019 6:30:00 PM

Pheromones really stick it to you! Aloha! Rico

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 3/2/2019 12:14:00 PM

Thanks a lot :)

Bobby May

Date: 2/25/2019 12:28:00 PM

This is excellent your words flow like water over glass, well done!!

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 3/2/2019 12:13:00 PM

Your words are so uplifting. Thanks a lot :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/24/2019 6:53:00 AM

"The song of my heart beat"...would also be nice...I like the spirit of the write...and style too...

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/24/2019 11:21:00 PM

You are right. That title is wonderful. :) Thanks a lot :)

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/24/2019 1:37:00 AM

This is one of the most beautiful short poems and love poems I have ever read! WOW! Awesome!

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/24/2019 11:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrew :)

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 2/23/2019 8:55:00 PM

Wow! Amazing write! :)

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:05:00 PM

Thank you so much :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/22/2019 12:14:00 PM

Such a beautifully romantic poem, Swetha. I enjoyed this debut splash into your ocean of thoughts and dreams. This is pure poetry. Welcome to PSoup, you are a talented wordsmith. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior

Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:07:00 PM

Your words are so encouraging Freddie. Thanks a ton :)