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The song of my heart

I heard someone singing your name My possessive soul travelled miles to find out who it is Tired, my body rested under a tree In the stillness of the air, I realised that the song is the beat of my heart.

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Date: 9/4/2019 8:46:00 PM
Interesting reflection of the jealousy one can feel toward someone who is passionate about the one you love, only to find out that one is you.
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:29:00 PM
Wow! Very creative!
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Date: 3/3/2019 11:50:00 AM
Lovely, lovely denouement, Swetha! ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/2/2019 12:09:00 PM
Lovely poem - we have to be still to so that we can hear, we have to look so that we can see and we have to speak wisely when spoken to. I love the song is the beat of my heart - do we stop to hear our heart beat as often as we should? Wonderful poetic flow. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 3/2/2019 12:16:00 PM
When we listen to our heart, we get to know answers to many questions. Thanks a lot Jennifer :)
Date: 2/25/2019 6:30:00 PM
Pheromones really stick it to you! Aloha! Rico
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 3/2/2019 12:14:00 PM
Thanks a lot :)
Date: 2/25/2019 12:28:00 PM
This is excellent your words flow like water over glass, well done!!
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 3/2/2019 12:13:00 PM
Your words are so uplifting. Thanks a lot :)
Date: 2/24/2019 6:53:00 AM
"The song of my heart beat"...would also be nice...I like the spirit of the write...and style too...
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/24/2019 11:21:00 PM
You are right. That title is wonderful. :) Thanks a lot :)
Date: 2/24/2019 1:37:00 AM
This is one of the most beautiful short poems and love poems I have ever read! WOW! Awesome!
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/24/2019 11:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrew :)
Date: 2/23/2019 8:55:00 PM
Wow! Amazing write! :)
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 2/22/2019 12:14:00 PM
Such a beautifully romantic poem, Swetha. I enjoyed this debut splash into your ocean of thoughts and dreams. This is pure poetry. Welcome to PSoup, you are a talented wordsmith. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:07:00 PM
Your words are so encouraging Freddie. Thanks a ton :)
Date: 2/22/2019 12:12:00 PM
how endearing, swetha...i like the romantic part of you!...huggs
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot Nette :)
Date: 2/22/2019 11:41:00 AM
Emotional writing of a possessive heart in love! Artfully written dear, Swetha!
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios :)
Date: 2/22/2019 7:55:00 AM
So cleverly done! Compliments to possessive soul--it found the beat.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:09:00 PM
Thanks a lot Vijay :)
Date: 2/22/2019 5:46:00 AM
Ah, profound, daring, and a tribute to your wise soul.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/23/2019 9:09:00 PM
Thank you :)