The Song of Father

My son, dear son, the artist of my future
Fixing the broken pieces of my every day
Breaking the sorrow of the massive turmoil
Giving the calm spirit made by the dungeon 

From your warm little hands, we rode
Together with the cause of the love of Narra
Pieces of your flowers joined in our laugh
In the eyes of many showing joyful smile on us

My son, dear son! Let me hold your hand
The balloon of yours uttering with the air
Your tame eyes figuring crystals in my sight
Reaching the rising action of this unknowing occurrence

My son! don't look back and stay with papa
Don't run! Don't move! Don't follow it!
Hold my fist firmly, don't walk away!
There it comes! Hit the angel, God's sake! Keep your breath!

Oh my son, my dear son feels my hug
Don't call the cold air will change you in trouble 
Show your crystal eyes to ease the pain
I command his soul, remain in him, meet me again!

My son, how darkly, how painful the end
Your story in the world unwritten by your father
Looking at you featuring the fairy tale
A tale that ended in ever after lonely song!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/30/2015 9:51:00 AM
I love all your poems but this one has really touched my heart as my father was not anything like this it is the way I would like him to be but I do know my Father God is and that is what is so touching to me as you have hit Father God right wher He is in my and everybodys LIFE Oh God I pray you reach out and touch this young ladies heart and keep it as pure as it is and lead her to the true wonders of thy way in Jesus name AMEN!! God's blessings lots of love and prayers to you always Elia
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:36:00 PM
This poem gives compelling evidence of some exceptionally deep thinking, and does so in exemplary poetic form. It's first rate, through and through.
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Date: 6/3/2013 7:37:00 AM
This is very well penned and powerful. You have evoked marvelous emotions. Stunning piece.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/3/2013 9:19:00 AM
very thankful Richard
Date: 6/1/2013 6:58:00 PM
wonderful write,,,,loved it
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/1/2013 7:30:00 PM
thanks Stephan and to your cute baby!
Date: 6/1/2013 3:58:00 AM
A song sang with intensity and grace!
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:44:00 AM
good to see you here DEME
Date: 6/1/2013 12:50:00 AM
Yes. This hit hard. The expressive & honest tone is quite riveting. Keep on being awesome! :)
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/1/2013 1:05:00 AM
thank you Drake, glad that you visited!
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