The Soldier

He stole a gun last night,
a telescopic rifle made for hunting.

From a sixth floor window overlooking Main 
he thinks, 'how cool!' that the 'scope brings
the people on the street so close and focused.

He spends all day breaking down the gun 
and re-assembling it,
polishing each part until it gleams.
He fits the telescope,
lifts the weapon to his shoulder
for just another look.

He'll bide his time until it's rush hour.
The streets will be teeming with people
making that last minute dash to get
last minute presents for Christmas.

The time has come, his palms are moist.
In the cross-hairs a Salvation Army captain,
a pregnant woman on a cell phone,
an old man struggling with his walker,
and children, lots of children.

A half-hour passes.
He slowly lowers the rifle
and puts it back into its case.

Another half-hour passes
and he stumbles down the stairwell 
to the street, his mind confused and torn.
Crossing a bridge he stops 
to hurl the case into the river.

He wanders slowly home 
to his studio apartment,
his haven of forgetfulness,
his pressed and perfect Ranger uniform,
and wonders why he just cannot stop crying.

He stole a gun last night...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/21/2008 3:12:00 AM
Holy man, what a powerhouse of a poem this is. Wow, I'm SO happy it ended this way, you just made my day, as many times, it goes the other. brilliant narrative, Keith. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/21/2008 2:08:00 AM
Astonishing poetry, Keith. Great imagery and masterfully written. Best, Nigel
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Date: 12/20/2008 8:33:00 PM
Wow, Keith this is a very powerful write. Deep and dark images. But your talent is so amazing that you can write about anything well. Interesting write! Love Robin
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