The Soft Goodbye of a Mountain Bear

He woke to the hush of a mountain thaw,  
Where snow gave way to pine and claw,  
The breath of spring in the alpine air,  
Stirred the long slumber of the highland bear.  

His coat still thick with the sleep of frost,  
Not knowing yet what he'd gained or lost,  
He sniffed the wind with a gentle grace,  
And lumbered down from his shadowed place.  

The creek sang low, the sun cast gold,  
The world, once icy, now warm and bold.  
He moved like dusk through the melting white,  
Drawn by hunger, drawn by light.  

But the forest's edge was not the same,  
A ribbon of danger blacktop flame,  
Where speed and steel meet fur and bone,  
And wild hearts walk this path alone.  

On Highway 14, the silence broke,  
A screech, a thud, then rising smoke.  
No hunter’s cry, no cub’s soft call 
Just the stillness after a sudden fall.  

Now he lies in the morning haze,  
A monarch felled in the modern maze.  
And the pines bow low in the April breeze,  
As ravens circle in silent pleas.  

For not all who wake from winter’s keep  
Will find the spring they dreamed in sleep.  
The highway roars, but none may hear  
The soft goodbye of a mountain bear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:37 PM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this very nice work that you have penned. Interesting topic chosen about which to write. It seems nature's habitat is disappearing and animal and man get in too close of a approximate but I hope that nature adjust and man spread slows down some. Congratulations on being on Home page. Sara K
Garcia  Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations, fellow poet This piece is as descriptive as a soft perfect rhythm. Beautifully crafted Many Blessings
Lowe Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Such a beautiful, imaging canvas with a profound allegorical meaning. I really enjoyed this poem and its thought provoking reflections. Thanks for the share, Abdul. One. Peace and love.
Agustin Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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