The Snowy Swan

The snowy swan skates on the pond
with brilliancy and innocence.
The ice-covered platinum blonde—
the snowy swan skates on the pond.
Sun’s mellowness of groovy yawned.
The athlete’s dawn drives diligence.
One snowy swan skates on the pond
with brilliancy and innocence.

2/1/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 9:12 PM
A lovely Triolet, Kim !
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 2:07 AM
Brilliant triolet that made me want to see this swan!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Caren! :)
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 7:46 PM
Methinks you are ready for the winter Olympics. I hear Al Jolson singing 'Swannee River' in Chinese. That'll be a kick, no doubt. ~ Bay Zing
Rodrigues Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 4:50 PM
As long as it isn’t Björk in her swan dress singing “Eye of the Tiger”
La France Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 1:43 PM
Kim, wonderful write! I love swans a lot so I love your poem ~ Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 2:46 PM
Thank you so much!
Gorelick Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:14 AM
A graceful Troilet, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Poet Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:56 AM
I Loved this poem; it is excitedly crafted and sketched the snow-covered swan accurately.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! When swans crane their heads together they form a heart. God’s creation is a marvel!
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:24 AM
A poem as elegant and beautiful as the swan!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! I’m loving this form.
Sands Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:23 AM
I love this beautiful poem! Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Thank you, Heidi! I appreciate it!
DiMino Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Quite a nice visual, Kim. Very classy poetry. Joe.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Lovey poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)
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