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The Snowy Swan

The snowy swan skates on the pond with brilliancy and innocence. The ice-covered platinum blonde— the snowy swan skates on the pond. Sun’s mellowness of groovy yawned. The athlete’s dawn drives diligence. One snowy swan skates on the pond with brilliancy and innocence. 2/1/2022

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Date: 2/8/2022 9:12:00 PM
A lovely Triolet, Kim !
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Date: 2/4/2022 2:07:00 AM
Brilliant triolet that made me want to see this swan!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! :)
Date: 2/2/2022 7:46:00 PM
Methinks you are ready for the winter Olympics. I hear Al Jolson singing 'Swannee River' in Chinese. That'll be a kick, no doubt. ~ Bay Zing
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2022 4:50:00 PM
As long as it isn’t Björk in her swan dress singing “Eye of the Tiger”
Date: 2/2/2022 1:43:00 PM
Kim, wonderful write! I love swans a lot so I love your poem ~ Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2022 2:46:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/1/2022 11:14:00 AM
A graceful Troilet, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 2/1/2022 10:56:00 AM
I Loved this poem; it is excitedly crafted and sketched the snow-covered swan accurately.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! When swans crane their heads together they form a heart. God’s creation is a marvel!
Date: 2/1/2022 10:24:00 AM
A poem as elegant and beautiful as the swan!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! I’m loving this form.
Date: 2/1/2022 10:23:00 AM
I love this beautiful poem! Well done :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi! I appreciate it!
Date: 2/1/2022 9:55:00 AM
Quite a nice visual, Kim. Very classy poetry. Joe.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 2/1/2022 7:37:00 AM
Lovey poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)

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