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The Snow Queen

The Snow Queen ~ The Snow Queen waved her magic wand, the skies they grew so dark Clouds moved in without a sound as shadows did embark Two happy lovers walked along, they felt a chill blow in He wrapped his arms around her soft to keep her warm with him The scenery was beautiful with geese upon the lake The scent of pine and winter breeze, they saw the first snow flake When then the sky was filled with more ice crystals floating down They marveled at the wondrous sight now white upon the ground She stared up at the heavens fair in circles she did spin He followed every move she made as fun would soon begin A thousand little snowflakes white were falling from the sky A perfect winter wonderland about them it did fly And then he saw her do it just like when they were so young She tried to catch a falling flake right there upon her tongue He chased the flurries with her as their laughter could be heard The neighbors out across the lake said not a single word Except to only wonder why such laughter they did hear When snow was steady falling and the winter sure was here Then they saw these happy lovers running hand in hand Catching snowflakes on their tongues and now they understand They heard him saying something yet it was so hard to hear Because these two were far away yes, not so very near The Snow Queen she was smiling as she looked down at these two She knew she’d made them happy with this magic she did do When then she saw him staring as a wink came from his eye For he was saying thank you to the Snow Queen in the sky Now every year its wintertime these two just look above Sending her a message that is floating on their love With beauty all around them and snow geese on the pond The Queen will grant their winter wish and wave her magic wand Now when the snow is falling and the world is fresh and new Between the laughter you might hear him tell her, I love you Good night Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/1/2018 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 12/1/2018 1:47:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful - such a romantic and such awesome poetry! Best wishes, Jennifer
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 11/28/2018 1:05:00 PM
The Snow Queen! Sigh! So picturesque, poetic, and pure! Keep tinkling the poetic ivory, my talented friend! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 1:16:00 PM
Thanks one more time Gershon for all of the nice comments you leave on my poetry. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 11/28/2018 10:05:00 AM
Beautiful image - you are so versatile.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 11/28/2018 9:35:00 AM
Chris, oh so beautifully penned and quite dreamy, love your write ~
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thank you again Dear Heart for all of your kindness.
Date: 11/28/2018 7:32:00 AM
This is a beautiful story. Filled with so much happiness and love between them. Certainly enchanting. A favorite. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your nice thoughts. I am happy you liked this one so much.
Date: 11/27/2018 9:10:00 PM
So very sweet, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim. :)
Date: 11/27/2018 8:28:00 PM
you have painted such a wonderful scene, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I hope it made you smile.
Date: 11/27/2018 7:12:00 PM
Your poem touched me with all the enchantment of a season’s first snowfall, Chris. I love snow and I love this beautiful romance under the magic of Snow Queen skies.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much Susan, I appreciate your kind words and I am so thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/27/2018 6:53:00 PM
Wow! epic writing my friend...full of rhymes...I like it, I like it a lot...love & light...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am glad you enjoyed this one.

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