Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

The Snooping Walls

The snooping walls are watching me
And now they know my secret kink.
I feel their eyes upon my back
And wonder what the hell they think.

I fear they’ll tell the world about
The prostitute I sawed in half.
I trust the doors and windows, though,
As when I killed, I heard them laugh…

For Susan’s If these walls could talk contest

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders September 21, 2012 at 7:46 PM Wow, Jack! An excellent and quite disturbing write. Don't worry your secrets safe...LOL! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Connie Marcum Wong September 21, 2012 at 4:20 AM This was so good, but so bad! Loved it Jack. Congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 20, 2012 at 12:00 PM Congratulations on your win Jack. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 18, 2012 at 3:20 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Lee Ramage September 18, 2012 at 2:41 PM Congrats on your write, well done. Sounds a bit like a broadway show, Todd Sweeney I think its called. Lee

Cecilia Macfarlane September 18, 2012 at 12:03 PM Congrats Jack on this great and sinister write! Hugs

Joann Grisetti September 18, 2012 at 9:57 AM Congratulations on your imaginative poem winning. teriific job.

Joyce Johnson September 18, 2012 at 9:12 AM "Wow Jack. I had no idea! Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2012 at 7:54 AM BIG CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A FABULOUS WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN .. ALWAYS A TREAT MY FRIEND ..

Bukang Liwayway September 18, 2012 at 5:43 AM super nice write Jack..i like it..congrats on your win!! (^_^)

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2012 at 9:05 PM I just knew she would love this. Susan has a great dark humor herself. Big congrats. It was deliciously morbid.

Len Gasun September 17, 2012 at 7:40 PM wow!! great write my friend! Congratulations on your big win!! hugs:) Leonora

Debbie Guzzi September 17, 2012 at 6:05 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joy Wellington September 17, 2012 at 5:30 PM I hope they talk on you Jack...lol. a funny one, but don't we wish walls could talk, so they perps could be caught more often and faster? great write and big congrats on a super win. One love. Joy Wells

Gwendolen Song September 17, 2012 at 3:20 PM You wrote this as tho u were a serial killer, eh?...Great concept and u blew the roof off the top with it!! Just leave it to Jack to write something grand!! Congrats, gwendolen

Nette Onclaud September 17, 2012 at 12:06 PM eerie yet beautifully crafted, jack.... sweet congrats and huggs!.:)

Kash Poet September 17, 2012 at 11:25 AM A great poem here jack!Congrats on your win.

Black Eyed Susan September 17, 2012 at 10:27 AM Congratulation on your #1 win Jack! Loved the dark humor in this one :)

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2012 at 10:24 AM Hola, Jack , congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 17, 2012 at 10:16 AM congratulations on you win Jack a smashing write xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2012 at 9:37 AM congrats on a supe win Jack luv .. most creative entry .. hope all is okay ..

Apoorva Patrikar September 16, 2012 at 3:15 AM scarily crazy! love this thing

Ilene Bauer September 8, 2012 at 7:27 AM wow, i was not prepared for the second verse! very cleverly done and beautifully rhymed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 8, 2012 at 6:51 AM what a terrific idea to make this a murder mystery within the walls Jack luv .. a brilliant and outstanding entry .. winning wishes luv ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 8, 2012 at 1:39 AM You always come up with something scary .........makes one wonder!!!! no just kidding love it .xx

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