The Snake

There once was a couple, called Adam and Eve Who a little joke they did conceive They told all, that as they walked They met a snake that talked But the plan backfired when it was believed.

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Ken Duddle

Date: 5/4/2015 5:25:00 AM

Thank you for the comments. I do not believe the original sin as I do not believe myths. I also have a poem called the Original Sin which is also about Adem and Eve http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_original_sin_394144

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 8:42:00 PM

Ken, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2015 8:03:00 PM

KEN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/11/2012 1:00:00 PM

What a strange begining for the human race! I believe it must be taken metaphorically. Fuuny stuff! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Ken Duddle
Date: 7/11/2012 1:24:00 PM

Depends on if you believe the original story. Read The Original Sin. It's kinda on the same subject. I have a satirical sense of humour.. Thanks for the feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/24/2012 12:18:00 PM

Well done Limerick and funny to....like it Ken. - oxox Anne-Lise