Ken Duddle Poet Limerick

The Snake

There once was a couple, called Adam and Eve
Who a little joke they did conceive
They told all,  that as they walked
They met a snake that talked
But the plan backfired when it was  believed.

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Ken Duddle May 4, 2015 at 5:25 AM Thank you for the comments. I do not believe the original sin as I do not believe myths. I also have a poem called the Original Sin which is also about Adem and Eve http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_original_sin_394144

Skat A May 3, 2015 at 8:42 PM Ken, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Poet Destroyer A May 3, 2015 at 8:03 PM KEN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Matthew Anish July 11, 2012 at 1:00 PM What a strange begining for the human race! I believe it must be taken metaphorically. Fuuny stuff! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Ken Duddle July 11, 2012 at 1:24 PM Depends on if you believe the original story. Read The Original Sin. It's kinda on the same subject. I have a satirical sense of humour.. Thanks for the feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2012 at 12:18 PM Well done Limerick and funny to....like it Ken. - oxox Anne-Lise