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The Smoking Room

Mutters in the corner, Halfheard mumblings of conversations, Uninteresting lives. Dull. Smoke from tabs mixing with Cold breath, dancing their escape. Staring. Dreaming. Slate grey walls holding up a shanty roof. Rain falls, pitter pat Random thoughts. Huddle together - apart.

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/18/2009 11:57:00 PM

Awesome and inspiring poem. Congratulations for being featured this week. Ernilando

Date: 6/15/2009 1:41:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/15/2009 6:52:00 AM

Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2009 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Malcolm. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Malcolm Carr

Date: 6/15/2009 5:32:00 AM

Thank you James, Vince, diane for your wonderful comments. I feel chuffed to be featured for the first time. Thanks again.

James Peranteau

Date: 6/15/2009 5:08:00 AM

Malcolm,..great poetry ! congrats on its feature this week ! james

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/15/2009 4:56:00 AM

Congras on "The Smoking Room" being featured, Malcolm. Vince

Diane Christian

Date: 6/15/2009 2:48:00 AM

congratulations on your poem being featured, wonderful work, God bless you from diane