The Smallest Ants Cast Long Shadows

Alan who is a great man and a peerless philosopher Has run for public office including the presidency Several times but still have not got to first base. He casts a long shadow, but people don’t appreciate his shade. Even his opponent who happened to be a small man comparatively, Not fit to be a parrot on his shoulder And yet public chose not Alan but the man with a long shadow. The small men when in power with weak leadership can cast long shadows of large range of influence. It often happens as the saying goes; "the smallest ants cast long shadows" It is a sure sign that the sun is about to set, Like an oil lamp burns brighter when oil is at its end.
+++ January 8, 2014 Form: Free verse

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Date: 2/19/2015 4:39:00 AM
Wonderful poetry. I liked the metaphor of power. The contest, and inequality of popularity. And then that most tantalising last line.
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Date: 2/16/2015 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work...nice job..:-)
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:58:00 AM
Dr Ram, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win*** Love **SKAT
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Date: 2/15/2015 4:54:00 PM
Great thoughts presented in a political work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:34:00 PM
congratulations Dr M on your ant win
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:31:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 1/29/2015 6:36:00 PM
Dr.Ram Mehta, a 7,very descriptive write, enjoyed reading your piece. Blessings Eve
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:52:00 AM
What a take on the contest, only you can do this Dr. .. :) thanks for dropping by on my poems.. :) GOd bless you always.. :)!
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Date: 1/8/2015 10:30:00 PM
Brilliant take Dr. Ram! Trust its a win for u!best wishes!
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:27:00 PM
wise words indeed Dr Mehta - I love your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/8/2015 4:22:00 PM
Enjoyed your story on casting shadows. I think the overbearing shadows stunt the growth of truth.
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Date: 1/8/2015 4:19:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, such excellent "outside the box" thinking by you on this theme! Much said here. Best wishes in the contest, Sandra
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Date: 1/8/2015 7:47:00 AM
Nicely done -- I wonder why we see the shadows but rarely the people who makes them! Well penned.
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