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The Sky She Sees Is Beautiful

To be at peace with myself again.. To .. Smell the scent of fresh-cut grass Hear the crunch of falling leaves Wear garlands of yellow daises Feel the crisp air of the breeze. Taste the rain upon my tongue as drops drizzle on my lips Run barefoot in fields of green Welcome back the bird song bliss. Leave behind shallow mud puddles Roll-up track pants to my knees Be happy with who I am and the simple life I lead. Because... In simplicity lives memories of who we were back then Before adulthood took over Kidnapped each sweet boy and girl. Oh this little girl inside me In dark woods it begs and screams She knows nothing of the cluttered world Her young heart belongs to dreams. Her thoughts as snow Untainted! Her words are loud and clear. The sky she sees is beautiful and love is everywhere. PS: Just a simple poem :)

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Date: 7/29/2023 7:30:00 PM
You are a free spirit, Charmaine Chircop! I Am Anaya
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Date: 7/19/2023 2:06:00 PM
And so is she... This one is a keeper
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/21/2023 10:59:00 AM
My pleasure and privilege
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/21/2023 7:55:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comment Tom
Date: 8/30/2018 5:59:00 AM
Made time to read more poetry this morn, glad that I did my friend . This is your usual brilliant and exceptional poetry. Verses that are so well crafted from a true poetic heart!! A fav....
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/21/2023 7:55:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading
Date: 5/5/2018 8:41:00 PM
Awesome write -JT
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Date: 3/28/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thinking of you my beautiful sister. I hope you are well :)
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Date: 3/5/2018 10:35:00 PM
This poem floats like a dream Char, nice!
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:05:00 PM
love your simplicity ...
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Date: 12/1/2017 1:55:00 PM
Charmaine,beauty is around us everywhere we look. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/1/2017 9:37:00 AM
I thought I would take another look through your beautiful eyes. I hope you are well and happy Charmaine.
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Date: 11/28/2017 3:11:00 PM
Well done Charma. So nice to read you once again...TAH
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Date: 11/25/2017 8:22:00 AM
Wonderful and touching. I love your poem, Charmaine. Truly charming.
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Date: 11/15/2017 5:01:00 PM
beautifully said. :) this made me smile.
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Date: 11/14/2017 9:49:00 AM
Simply beautiful Charmaine. One who sees the beauty in sky, she must be very very adorable. Thank you !
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Date: 11/14/2017 8:29:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem that brings a smile to my face. Nice to see you back, you were deeply missed
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Date: 11/13/2017 3:17:00 PM
beautifully painted charmaine the innocence of nature holds the key captured in the heart of your pen excellent piece i pray you have a blessed week pal
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Date: 11/11/2017 12:43:00 PM
"She knows nothing of the cluttered world Her young heart belongs to dreams." I love this, so much so.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/13/2017 8:44:00 AM
Hi Sami.How wonderful to see you here on PS,and more reading my poem.I am looking forward to read some of yours,so pls don't keep us waiting.Your poems page is empty.. I hope it will be filled soon.
Date: 11/11/2017 4:37:00 AM
The child's eye view is the best eye view. Nice poem.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/13/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Richard.Indeed it is.
Date: 11/10/2017 9:00:00 PM
lol ... made me smile ... thank you ...
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/13/2017 8:48:00 AM
Did it ? Great.I never saw a stranded star that smiles :).Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/9/2017 1:40:00 PM
I saw your posts here and there and knew you must be back. This is a lovely piece. Childhood is indeed sweet. Welcome back.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/13/2017 8:46:00 AM
Hi Soul Sister..So happy to be here again dear x
Date: 11/6/2017 3:51:00 PM
A beautifully done simple poem, CC. Your pen voice is good to hear again. Such an innocent poem w/o any guile. Pristine poetry. Love and joy always.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/7/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading Freddie. :)
Date: 11/6/2017 4:44:00 AM
Simply beautiful Charmaine. Welcome back, you have been missed. Love and Joy...Maria xxx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/7/2017 2:22:00 PM
Hi Sweet friend..Thanks for reading.I missed all of you too.x
Date: 11/5/2017 4:34:00 AM
Simple...perhaps? But still very beautiful! Lovely sentiment perfectly espoused. My best regards, Charmaine. :) john
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2017 3:33:00 AM
Thanks John.Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/4/2017 9:48:00 PM
PS: just a simple note to say this was so beautiful! :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2017 3:31:00 AM
PS: I thank you :)
Date: 11/4/2017 1:15:00 PM
Char you have always been a great friend. I was so happy to see you show up on my page. I love you and I love your poetry. A huge fav. Always, armand.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2017 3:28:00 AM
Armand.You and yours are always in my prayers .It feels good to be home.Thankyou :)
Date: 11/4/2017 8:11:00 AM
Hi Charma, This poem is not a simple write. It is beautiful and it reminds us to look for "beauty" although it may be hidden. When we change our perspective the beauty of "life" is all around us. Thanks for sharing this gem. I'm so happy that you are back:-) Alexis
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2017 3:27:00 AM
Oh thanks sweet Alexis.I'll be reading you sn dear.
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