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the sky is crying

lover #1 haiku: falling snow flowing like angry tears the sky is crying lover #2 tanka moods dependant on whim of fickle nature foolishly expressed even storms are beautiful when they are shared by two. for Debbie Guzzi's "Love Talks" contest

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Date: 3/10/2011 7:10:00 AM
Your title made me start singing the "Stevie Ray Vaughn" songs with the same title. Good luck in Debbie's contest with this lovely poem Francine....:)
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:52:00 PM
Hey, this is really cool, Francine. which is the guy and which is the girl? I was guessing the girl gave the haiku message but now I think maybe I am wrong! Good luck in the contest and thanks again for the HM!
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Date: 3/5/2011 4:53:00 AM
Lovely words for this contest Francine ..good luck my friend.. though I think no caps for your title .. in this one .. check with Debbie as this is what she told me..luv.. great dialogue ...
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful expression of the exchange, Francine
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:05:00 PM
You did a great job with this theme Francine. The sky may be crying but the last two lines left me smiling. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:29:00 PM
Oh, that's lovely and so true, Francine. Nature is fickle, but true love never falters. It's really fun to snuggle with a loved one and watch lightning as a storm rages outside. Best wishes in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:23:00 PM
Very good...best wishes for the contest...
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:37:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Good luck in the great contest...Sara
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:36:00 PM
wow, I love how you did yours! Particularly the way the man answered!! (second is for the man, right? )Maybe not!!
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