The Sky Has Limits

heart as sparrow is slain    struck by the azure of the looking glass pane









17.12.22

Composed for Silent One's
Monoku 1: Your Best - Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/2/2018 2:40:00 PM
So touching, Maureen. Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/3/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Line :) xomo!
Date: 12/31/2017 6:07:00 AM
Dang it! I love this which mean I like mine less now. Good luck, Dear.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2017 8:17:00 AM
Lol! Familiar with that feeling, the dang I wish I wrote that. I'll take that as a compliment, thank you dear! I did get a placement with this :) xomo!
Date: 12/30/2017 9:03:00 PM
Gorgeous write ... and such a well-deserved win! Congrats, Maureen! :-)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2017 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Greg :) xomo!
Date: 12/28/2017 6:46:00 PM
Congrats, Mo. xo:-)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Ram :) Blessings! xomo
Date: 12/28/2017 4:07:00 PM
My Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn
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Date: 12/28/2017 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this one, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Barry :)
Date: 12/28/2017 9:59:00 AM
Great verse, Maureen, hugs eve
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 12/28/2017 7:24:00 AM
Wonderful Maureen...congrats :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2017 8:26:00 PM
Thank you David :)
Date: 12/28/2017 5:18:00 AM
Beautifully done, Maureen ... Congratulations ...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2017 8:25:00 PM
Thank you Probir
Date: 12/27/2017 7:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win Maureen ..
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/28/2017 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 12/27/2017 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Maureen! Yes, the sky indeed does have limits! Janice
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:23:00 PM
Don't it! ;) thank you, all the best xomo!
Date: 12/27/2017 9:26:00 AM
Interesting work..Congrats on your win..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Sara. The season's best to you! xomo
Date: 12/27/2017 7:27:00 AM
and congrats to you as well!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Mike! :)
Date: 12/27/2017 5:13:00 AM
This is lovely and creative, although the topic is sad, Maureen. Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Paul xomo!
Date: 12/27/2017 2:15:00 AM
Lovely creative sadness
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Ingrid! :)
Date: 12/27/2017 1:17:00 AM
Sad Maureen but beautifully written.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank you James :)
Date: 12/27/2017 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Maureen on your great win.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/27/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 12/26/2017 10:44:00 PM
A sadly beautiful and well expressed Monoku Maureen. I love the creative imagery and the internal rhyme.. Congratulations for you wonderful win with this amazing write. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 11:09:00 PM
Thank you deeply Susan :) mo hugs!
Date: 12/26/2017 9:36:00 PM
Oh here is one I remember. Good to see it on the winner list, Maureen. Congratulations.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :) xomo!
Date: 12/26/2017 6:58:00 PM
LOVE this Maureen!! Very well done! Congratulations on your placement!!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Judith! :) xomo!
Date: 12/26/2017 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations, Maureen. Well said! God knows when a sparrow falls!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Curtis :)
Date: 12/26/2017 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations Maureen, well done...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Charlie :) xomo!
Date: 12/26/2017 2:39:00 PM
- Really great and touching written, Maureen - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :) xomo!
Date: 12/26/2017 2:12:00 PM
Very deep Mo.. Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/26/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One! Thank you for inspiring it :) xomo!
Date: 12/24/2017 9:17:00 AM
Moving piece
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/24/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Mike :)
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