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The Sky Has Limits

heart as sparrow is slain    struck by the azure of the looking glass pane









17.12.22

Composed for Silent One's
Monoku 1: Your Best - Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 2:40 PM

So touching, Maureen. Well done. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 3, 2018 at 1:10 PM

Thank you Line :) xomo!

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 6:07 AM

Dang it! I love this which mean I like mine less now. Good luck, Dear.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2017 at 8:17 AM

Lol! Familiar with that feeling, the dang I wish I wrote that. I'll take that as a compliment, thank you dear! I did get a placement with this :) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden

December 30, 2017 at 9:03 PM

Gorgeous write ... and such a well-deserved win! Congrats, Maureen! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2017 at 11:54 PM

Thank you Greg :) xomo!

Ram R. V.

December 28, 2017 at 6:46 PM

Congrats, Mo. xo:-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2017 at 8:28 PM

Thank you Ram :) Blessings! xomo

James Horn

December 28, 2017 at 4:07 PM

My Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn

Barry Stebbings

December 28, 2017 at 1:07 PM

Congrats on your win with this one, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2017 at 8:27 PM

Thank you Barry :)

Eve Roper

December 28, 2017 at 9:59 AM

Great verse, Maureen, hugs eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2017 at 8:27 PM

Thank you Eve :)

David Mohn

December 28, 2017 at 7:24 AM

Wonderful Maureen...congrats :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2017 at 8:26 PM

Thank you David :)

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 5:18 AM

Beautifully done, Maureen ... Congratulations ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2017 at 8:25 PM

Thank you Probir

Joseph May

December 27, 2017 at 7:57 PM

Congrats on your win Maureen ..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2017 at 12:25 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Janice Canerdy

December 27, 2017 at 9:31 AM

Congratulations on your win, Maureen! Yes, the sky indeed does have limits! Janice

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:23 PM

Don't it! ;) thank you, all the best xomo!

Sara Kendrick

December 27, 2017 at 9:26 AM

Interesting work..Congrats on your win..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:22 PM

Thank you Sara. The season's best to you! xomo

Mike Gentile

December 27, 2017 at 7:27 AM

and congrats to you as well!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:21 PM

Thank you Mike! :)

Paul Callus

December 27, 2017 at 5:13 AM

This is lovely and creative, although the topic is sad, Maureen. Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:20 PM

Thank you Paul xomo!

Ingrid Showalter Swift

December 27, 2017 at 2:15 AM

Lovely creative sadness

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:19 PM

Thank you Ingrid! :)

James Inman

December 27, 2017 at 1:17 AM

Sad Maureen but beautifully written.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thank you James :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

December 27, 2017 at 12:01 AM

Congratulations, Maureen on your great win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Subimal :)

Susan Ashley

December 26, 2017 at 10:44 PM

A sadly beautiful and well expressed Monoku Maureen. I love the creative imagery and the internal rhyme.. Congratulations for you wonderful win with this amazing write. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 11:09 PM

Thank you deeply Susan :) mo hugs!