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The Sky Has Limits

heart as sparrow is slain struck by the azure of the looking glass pane 17.12.22 Composed for Silent One's Monoku 1: Your Best - Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:40:00 PM

So touching, Maureen. Well done. Congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2018 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Line :) xomo!

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/31/2017 6:07:00 AM

Dang it! I love this which mean I like mine less now. Good luck, Dear.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2017 8:17:00 AM

Lol! Familiar with that feeling, the dang I wish I wrote that. I'll take that as a compliment, thank you dear! I did get a placement with this :) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/30/2017 9:03:00 PM

Gorgeous write ... and such a well-deserved win! Congrats, Maureen! :-)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/30/2017 11:54:00 PM

Thank you Greg :) xomo!

Ram R. V.

Date: 12/28/2017 6:46:00 PM

Congrats, Mo. xo:-)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/30/2017 8:28:00 PM

Thank you Ram :) Blessings! xomo

James Horn

Date: 12/28/2017 4:07:00 PM

My Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/28/2017 1:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this one, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/30/2017 8:27:00 PM

Thank you Barry :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/28/2017 9:59:00 AM

Great verse, Maureen, hugs eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/30/2017 8:27:00 PM

Thank you Eve :)

David Mohn

Date: 12/28/2017 7:24:00 AM

Wonderful Maureen...congrats :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/30/2017 8:26:00 PM

Thank you David :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 5:18:00 AM

Beautifully done, Maureen ... Congratulations ...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/30/2017 8:25:00 PM

Thank you Probir

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2017 7:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win Maureen ..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/28/2017 12:25:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/27/2017 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Maureen! Yes, the sky indeed does have limits! Janice

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:23:00 PM

Don't it! ;) thank you, all the best xomo!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2017 9:26:00 AM

Interesting work..Congrats on your win..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:22:00 PM

Thank you Sara. The season's best to you! xomo

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/27/2017 7:27:00 AM

and congrats to you as well!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Mike! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2017 5:13:00 AM

This is lovely and creative, although the topic is sad, Maureen. Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thank you Paul xomo!

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 12/27/2017 2:15:00 AM

Lovely creative sadness

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Ingrid! :)

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 1:17:00 AM

Sad Maureen but beautifully written.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:18:00 PM

Thank you James :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 12/27/2017 12:01:00 AM

Congratulations, Maureen on your great win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/27/2017 12:18:00 PM

Thank you Subimal :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 10:44:00 PM

A sadly beautiful and well expressed Monoku Maureen. I love the creative imagery and the internal rhyme.. Congratulations for you wonderful win with this amazing write. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/26/2017 11:09:00 PM

Thank you deeply Susan :) mo hugs!