The Skull and the Girl

Her thin white legs are sweet.
She crouches down,
takes a small brush,
sweeps dirt off my partly exposed skull.
I am extinct, the way some pachyderms are
while others are not.
Ice fields turn to desert.
Wind-straws evolve into sun hats.
An archaeologist discovers.
I like her hands,
they cup and measure,
they feel the weight of dispersed things.
The flesh over her knees
gentles the earth. She spreads herself –
an eclipse of her.
She tugs my skull from the earth,
uncouples my emptiness.
An era passes an age.
I am a footprint in an Alzheimer’s ward,
yet I recall her fingers
how once they brought sight to my eye-sockets,
how she placed me under the green-vine
of her life, cared for my hollowness,
planted the scent of her youth in it.
Questions like:
who-what-where,
and how
do not arise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ferdous Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Somehow this poem reminded of "Dark matter." Hollowness, emptiness is like sometimes like the darkest black hole, nothing to give, nothing to gain. Like a both way dilemma. In this situation, we as muslim rely on our supernatural power and say "In sha Allah (God willing). Do not judge with a prejudiced mind. Just delete it if you find it otherwise.
Ashford Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Well gosh Tamanna, that is certainly one way to look at it. It is set in a timeless zone between life and life, so you might have a point here. Thanks.
Marine Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Taken by surprise, happily so! An unusual angle poetically described. Almost has a an art house movie quality, in the way you have "directed" the imagery. Intriguing poem , Eric- so glad I found it today! :-)
Ashford Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Aqua, it's 'off the wall' but seems to strike a chord with some readers. I am glad I found your poetry also. Obliged to you.
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