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I staked out strategically vital areas of the ground Rain and clouds are rising in the sky Inhaling the petrichor refreshed me  On the innermost side, I'm confused  What I feel is deeply rooted in my persona. The dying are showered with affection With wide arms to meet the afflicted Sentient souls are left to fend for themselves A pledge of peace is an act of love Let's rely on one another What happens if we cease hoping?  I adopt a break to savor the lone wildflower Realizing there is an array of flowers   That won't acquire any focus or scrutiny To expand higher, toward the sun  The sky is clear and overcast Emitting a faint glow Despite this, we stick with one another Volunteers sprout from roots For the sake of saving us all Should we stay alive to save our true nature? An inner voice urges us onward Avoid wasting strength on rage And won't benefit from the conflicts Our forefathers were quite busy However, their guidance could be valuable  We can also learn from them   Let's build up our strength And show mercy  Toward those who have strayed This is an intense expression of love. Spring arrival has been duly stated  We shall recover our mobility  While holding hands and floating along.
Written: May 08, 2023

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Date: 5/9/2023 5:51:00 AM
Much to gleam from your poem my friend. Your quest for answers resonates: A pledge of peace is an act of love Let's rely on one another What happens if we cease hoping...
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