The Silver In Mud

no more small talk to say in numbers walking the trail
and these are added up and equal now us on the mountain marsh exploring
in the mind's eye glittering 
like water oozing quicksilvers under this yellow sun
like my breath in time's undulating tides beckoning thankyou
and so I bow before your respect and seeing
in hopes of holding a memory forever in deepness 
and high your appreciation is the knowing stillness spreading through the veins of a universal 
creature
as named fireweed as cow parsnip as 
the seeds and sacred black and nourishing soil supporting the perfect desire I am witnessing 
now in You
a  sensitivity that can touch this quivering truth as a leaf cradles sunbeams in joy and 
in reverence
and grows whole
with cycles called days and years as quick as these tattering turned pages we have caught up 
with ourselves in
time and tomorrows and pinwheels of planets and stars and the revolution around our center 
creaking slowing toward halt toward
knowing
the primordial morning of my arm around you standing once again at the beginning 
older than friends watching sunrises 
with the feeling of gravity evaporated into the air and events in time flow behind 
as sure as step into the slip so cold rushing stream washes silvery slick mud spread thick
from our toes hands arms and our skin your face becoming clean again and sparkling in the 
light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 9:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 12, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Ryan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 21, 2015 at 4:24 PM
RYAN, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
Palli Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 9:36 AM
very original! I enjoyed that.
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December 13, 2010 at 12:05 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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December 12, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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December 12, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Very interesting write! Well written, and very detailed.... Keep writing, I'm looking forward to reading more... Dana'lynn
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