The Silver Bell

Aunt Elsa’s Maid

By Elton Camp

Aunt Elsa always had a thing to tell
Each visit she picked up a silver bell
“To call my maid, this is what I use.
She comes and does what I choose.”

But, somehow the maid was away
Whenever it was our visiting day
Aunt Elsa had a most ordinary job
Yet she had the demeanor of a snob

But her sophistication she did parade
Continually reminded us of her maid
We all acted just so very impressed
Did no harm to go along, we guessed

We didn’t the actual fact misconstrue
The “maid” when the words were true
Wasn’t a servant the bell could seek
But  a cleaning lady one day a week

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/29/2010 8:59:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Elton. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:08:00 PM
To Barbara: Yes, there was, but I changed her name just in case any of her family should happen to see it. She has been dead for several years. I wouldn't have written it during her lifetime. Elton
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:02:00 PM
Clever..Was there really an Aunt Elsa?..BG
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Date: 11/28/2010 11:44:00 AM
that was a great poem, brought a smile to my face!
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:23:00 AM
The mind sees what it desires and the tongue merely expresses the thoughts to others. Excellent piece enjoued the read.
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