The Silent Vigil

(A conjuncture of a
busy mind!)

Oh dear friend if
your health returns
As surely does the
rising sun
May it take this
unyielding waste
From your shallow
face,
Sow the seeds of
vitality
To abide within your
limbs
And behold the
welcome of
Strength regained.

When within a
portrait of
well-being
So vain one scorns
the joys of life
indeed
While destiny left
to the will of God,
Yet I must not
confess this image
reflecting
Only one of care and
encouragement
Till the winter’s
eve of his life
stains death,
No time now I fear
of one’s self
applause
Only the time to
seek out repentance.

Alas tis with a
woeful eye
That makes me seek
my conscience
Which deeply I
search to utter
What I have within
my heart,
To watch him close
to the Reaper
Where attempts to
negotiate
Peals in tenderness
to restore
Life from the icy
clasp of death.

Oh this dwelling of
fear these lips
cannot express
Yet forever dear
friend in my memory
stored!

© Harry J Horsman  2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/20/2010 8:03:00 PM
The last two lines really bring it home, Harry. This is quite poignant. Very heart-felt. About Take Me Home. Did you want to know where my home was? I miss Iowa (when we all lived there together. Now we are spread out across the country in different states!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:27:00 AM
enjoyed reading your solemn poetry....
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:34:00 AM
a riveting soulful gem that arrests all senses with your visceral images and beautiful poignant mood... much winning luck in the fondest memory contest, john, if this is entered!... warmest, nette
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Date: 12/11/2010 11:42:00 AM
Harry, amazing write... You have an apt way of bringing the emotions across, blessings to you Wilma
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Date: 12/10/2010 1:18:00 PM
We never appreciate life as much as those who are about to lose theirs, Harry. This is quite a moving tribute to your sick friend and I know what it's like to keep that "Silent Vigil." Maybe God will bless your friend with a miracle recovery. Sorry to hear you're going through this. Love and blessings, carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:54:00 PM
Harry,your poem is very deep and touching.Portrayal of death is very nice.
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Date: 12/9/2010 11:48:00 AM
a very sad and reflective write Harry, with many sentiments, not shore that i get all of it yet i see you have put in much effort. and thank you so much for your comments.
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:25:00 AM
Hello Harry, Wonderful write, I find myself feeling like it all comes and goes so fast! Love this As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/9/2010 6:45:00 AM
Interesting work about death, illness, and being restored...Enjoyed reading your work..I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2010 6:40:00 AM
A most powerful write Harry my friend.. a memory written brilliantly luv.. with wonderful word usage expressing the entire theme of the contest ... good luck and thankxx for your sweet and warm...always welcome comments with luv..
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:34:00 AM
The emotions are superb Harry. The last line is a masterpiece.
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:32:00 AM
It is a nice tale of so many expressions that we witness in our life, harry
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Date: 12/9/2010 3:29:00 AM
Interesting and well written read. Dark, illness, hope, futility, memories, realization, all wrapped up into one short excellent poem. Nice job
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