The Sick Child-Edvard Munch

THE SICK CHILD-EDVARD MUNCH

Ghostly downpour upon not the sick,
but the sick at heart - a child’s mother.
Bittersweet tangle of red - patient’s hair,
dresser, caretaker’s hands. Bedside
manner, sorrowful to the point of death,
but the woman is not literally dying,
her daughter is. Steadfast bravery
warm blanket hue of hunter-green,
orange and blue. The girl’s mother
already draped in a dreary raven habit.
The sick room is passionate - lucky girl
is blessed. She is not alone until
her soul departs. Her mother will live
with a solitary soul-sucking pit, deep
inside of her residual days, memories
tucked away from all her friends, for
she will dread the fire of life - the source
that lit her lamp with strawberry hair,
freckled windsong, a swinging pendulum.
The sick child, already in the light;
despair has a screaming voice,
perceived in claustrophobic space.
One is lightened by breathlessness;
the other is lightened by a broken heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Kim, your interpretation of this poem relives heartbreak and truly "sucks" the life from my heartbeat! So well written! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Thank you so much, Sam! I haven’t lived this but I know a family who lost their 5 year old to the effects of radiation (for cancer). I knew a little about heartbreak from losing my mom. Be blessed, dear friend!
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 6:31 PM
"Her mother will live with a solitary soul-sucking pit, deep inside of her residual days, memories" - True. A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Toney Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Kim, what a heartbreaking poem of a mom caring for her dying daughter. “Her mother will live with a solitary soul-sucking pit, deep inside of her residual days, memories tucked away from all her friends, for she will dread the fire of life...” Congratulations on your placement in Dilly Dally’s contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Mark!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Congratulations, Kim. Sad, but your interpretation is stunning!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Mala!
Hind Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Gorgeous writing, Kim!! I love the beginning and ending lines; you do well!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Excellent interpretation of it, Kim. Love the clarity of your language.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:54 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate that!
Buehler Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 12:19 PM
An exceedingly fine poem, on a parent's saddest hour. Kim, you've done an amazing job with your portrayal of the painting. Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:55 PM
Thank you very much, my friend! Blessings!
George Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 8:51 AM
The pathetic situation of the ailing child is heart stirringly brought out. More than the ailing child, the one who deserves our sympathy is the grieving mother bent low with the weight of grief. In a way the child is lucky as she is not left alone. " One is lightened by breathlessness; the other is lightened by a broken heart" The concluding lines stand apart. A beautiful poetic presentation of the painting, dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Thank you very much, Valsa!
Poet Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Kim, your work is truly a masterpiece, exhibiting a seamless cadence that resonates with profound sagacity. Within this poetic composition, you eloquently express a depth of emotional anguish that profoundly resonates within me. The indescribable sorrow that accompanies an ailing child is an unparalleled torment. Your words have stirred my soul!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 4:01 PM
How do I express my appreciation to you, my friend…thank you so much!
DiMino Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Well, having done medical transport, and practically lived in many aftercare homes and hospital corridors for many years, I can relate. A sick child is the worst heartache. Stirring write! Hope all is well with you and yours.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 4:00 PM
Sighing with your experience…must have been difficult. Thank you, Joe.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:16 PM
My dear Kim, I always like your poems but this is a masterpiece. We both know what death brings (I often think of your father who lost his wife). A poem so full of emotional grief I can relate to. My sister died young too, about twelve but many years ago. She was an angel like my wife.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 5:14 AM
Thank you, dear Victor! So sorry for your loss…that too is a sad one. Hugs ~ Kim
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