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The Shroud

The sky is a lively witness to waiting The light shines it rays outwards For those who see, it shines a beacon in a dark place It resonates mystery But the dance moves on without you Only the rich burn umber smell of time remains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2024 12:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/8/2016 1:15:00 PM
ALFRED, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:22:00 AM
this was very nice good job. cory
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:59:00 PM
WELCOME here in the poetry soup!!!! find yourself busy in this group,..writing and sharing your thoughts and ideas through poetry pieces or through comments and suggestions....***jun-jun
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:25:00 PM
Crea tive and very impressive write, Alfred
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:05:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Alfred. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:16:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creativity in poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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