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The Shriek

It was time to come in from the cold I am no longer young, I am old My legs long and hairy They creak when I walk Once the talk of the town But they now let me down So I hide in the corner and nod off to sleep When all of a sudden I hear a loud shriek What’s all that commotion Well I don’t have a notion Through sleepy blue eyes I take a quick peep There’s a man with a broom head Getting too close for comfort His face is so red, such a gigantic head With the broom head he pokes so I freeze and play dead Then he turns to the Shriek and scratches his head So deciding to move to a place more discreet But confused lose my sense of direction My legs they collapse I am feeling quite weak Running over her legs Running over her feet I panic running over the Shriek Consumed with fright she went out like a light As she crashed to the floor in a heap I was so out of breath for she’d crushed me to death So beware all Arachnids steer clear of the Shriek... Written 26th November 2018 Contest Strand Choice O Sponsor Brian Strand 1st Place

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Date: 3/24/2020 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/25/2020 8:45:00 AM
Many thanks dear Brenda for you welcome visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/24/2020 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Ann on your top win with this delightful story poem! So fun!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/25/2020 8:47:00 AM
Wow, thank you Sam and so pleased you enjoyed my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/24/2020 9:55:00 AM
'Ann, A well-deserved win! Wish I could SHRIEK my congratulations loud enough for you to hear. David'
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/25/2020 8:42:00 AM
I am hearing them loud and clear David and thank you very much... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/26/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Ann. Now I have a brand spanking new character to chase me at night, when I am wide awake, but cannot sleep for fear of the Shriek!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/25/2020 8:43:00 AM
Oh dear, but as long as you are not a spider I think you will be safe dearest Caren, Haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

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