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The Shower Curtain

. The flower’s image before me stares So overwhelmed by the splendor my fingers become agitated restless frantic and what spills sears mine slip stunning sky blue decorate the sylphs eyes clustered blond tresses ornament her soft Caucasian flesh to her hips leading this soul’s gaze to those naked distended lips The poet pining for this petite nubile miss

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John Loving Iii

Date: 11/22/2011 5:44:00 AM

youthfull or soulless is this sylph?

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/14/2011 7:52:00 PM

Don't know which is more fun, your verse or Daver's pacemaker. Either way, I enjoyed both.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/13/2011 10:57:00 AM

Keep your eye on the shower curtain flower. The one within is mere whimsy. Be still my old heart - pace maker going wild. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/13/2011 10:50:00 AM

All that is left to say is, ooh la la~ very sensual write, James!

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/12/2011 11:47:00 AM

Sensual and yet so delicate, this made me smile James, luckily it is almost 9pm over here ;) enjoy your weekend, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2011 7:27:00 AM

I should have read this one Sat. evening rather than Sat. morning cause now my mind is going bonkers with visual passion James.. u are the master of this technique luv.. enticing the reader and building the suspense... will be mesmerized and haunted all weekend with these charming lines.. enjoy blessings...luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:59:00 AM

And now you are at the shower curtain. Boy, James, you just love seeing those nude women in every place imaginable! Your poetry fits the lyrics of that song that says, "my sweet little imagination!"

M.I.A .

Date: 11/11/2011 10:36:00 PM

olala, very sexy piece indeed! with beautiful words in between. can't say which one is more tempting, the miss or the poet here ;D LoL! thanks for stopping by. best wishes always

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/11/2011 8:46:00 PM

Hi James~this is some kind of hot write...what a scene in this shower...hope your mother is not also a ps member!! ha ha, great write. Gwendolen

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/11/2011 4:03:00 PM

this is a sensual, subtly erotic write, I like :-) don't think I've read any of your work before, but I shall read more...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2011 1:02:00 PM

Wonderfully romantic, James! I can just imagine you pining for the "petite nubile miss" behind the shower curtain. I think this is one of your best poems and it's going to my favorites. I did find an old address for you and hope you haven't moved. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/11/2011 12:03:00 PM

Its a chilly day here in good ole NY but your words jus kicked up the temp!!! always Michael