The Showdown

Into the street he sauntered one day Might be his last, no one could say. Wore a sassy Stetson, chaps and spurs ring-jingly things, with raucous burrs. A silvered six gun pressed his hip a tiny tremble dressed his lip. Tough as nails with firm resolve he hoped this battle would absolve, a hidden weed of secret fear (kept to himself, so very near). With nerves of steel he ambled along his sober thoughts a mournful song. It was not very far across the town to the scene of the big showdown. When he reached the square he gave a shout to a lurking foe he yelled, “COME OUT!” But no man breached the lair’s cold door, so he lifted the latch, chilled to the core. His enemy glanced up, with face in mask, our hero blanched, crushed by his task. His quick draw hand was not advanced but a warm foul liquid filled his pants For in the hand of his fated foe was a killing tool, he’d soon come to know. “Mommy!” “Mommy! “Mommy!” the gunslinger cried. Thrice he pleaded, but was denied. For the quest he faced was not for thrill. It was the dreaded, droning, Dentist’s drill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Borke Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Fabulous surprise!
Flats Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thanks Hannah. I probably worked harder on this one than almost any poem I've written. Trying to get that many lines to come out correctly in cadence and rhyme scheme is a lot of work!
Hoffman Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Love the dentist twist at the end John; which reminds me of my upcoming appt. in 2 weeks, gulp! Great unique western poem! Cheerios~Che
Flats Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:15 AM
gulp times two, I gulp for you!
Hauser  Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Hahaha!
Flats Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:13 AM
If U B smilin' I B pleased
Daniel Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Ouch! That hits home, though I simply don't like it, not fear it:) a 'jaw - twisting' write (pun intended) :)
Flats Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:12 AM
GOTD! (giggle of the day award) for excellent punnery:-)
Murray Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 12:53 PM
I shouldn't laugh....
Flats Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:11 AM
I hope you do!
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 3:34 AM
... Who is not .... helpless we lie in the chair with open mouth ... with fear ... and the dentist's drill comes closer and closer - A great poem, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flats Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Ooh, your comment reads like a horror story! Huggadoodles ~ j
Smith Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 11:24 AM
GOTD
Flats Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Score!
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Hi John, When I first started reading I thought I was watching some old western flick. But I your twist at the end threw me for a loop.It was totally unexpected. I can relate I'm still terrified of the dentist. Bring on the laughing gas lol! :-) Alexis
Flats Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 10:04 AM
GOTD! (Bring on the laughing gas lol!). Love it! You know, I've never had laughing gas! I'm deprived!!! :-):-):-)
Merritt Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Hilarious childhood scenario of a gunslinger in his own version of "High Noon" and facing a foe worse than any Cooper had faced in said movie. And an apropos response for such a gunslinger.
Flats Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 10:03 AM
In my childhood world the dentist was WAY worse than Black Bart! Thanks for visiting my silliness. ~ john
Allison Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Love the twist at the end of the poem John - can relate from my childhood but I have no fear of the dentist now!:-( hugs jan xx
Flats Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 10:00 AM
My childhood dentist started college in forestry. I have had more that one tooth attacked with a chain saw! This was a hard write for me, I'm not used to using so many words and getting a "Jan twist" at the end was also a challenge! Huggabugs ~ j
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