The Shortest Poem I Have Ever Written

Pay Day
Wayhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Buck Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Jan: Was scouting through a few of your older works and ran across this fine specimen. Very creative. Most of my readers would prefer mine be a little shorter. :o) oldbuck
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 3:58 PM
I like to vary the length of my poems I find people don't tend to read the longer ones unless you grab their attention from the very first line - thanks for all your support i do appreciate it. if you would like to hear my voice please go to my 'poem' of 5th August where there is a link to the Manx radio programme where tthe story of my poetry journey was aired last week:-) hugs jan xx
Ward Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Roy might re-quote his "lipstick on a pig" phrase if you do. :) Hugs, Julia
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Oh I do love that saying lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ward Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 8:49 AM
You can now beat your own record by taking out one of the "y's". Hugs, Julia, xx
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Oh I could re post it for Roy's contest lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Jones Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:36 AM
That's it?!!!!! LMAO Why not? Makes perfect sense. *S* Cynthia
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 9:38 AM
LOl - it rhymes - its a poem lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Collins Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 7:49 AM
short- yes. to the ever-loving point. yes.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 11:58 AM
And it rhymes - even better ... best day of the month and mine is tomorrow! Hugs Jan xxx
Brewer Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 4:39 PM
My fave. xx
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 4:43 PM
My fave day too thank you Jenny xxxxxx Jan
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Go to town and get everything you need.
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 10:41 AM
I live on a little Island not on the UK mainland called the Isle of Man so shopping not big on my list of priorities lol. Got to pay to get my son through university that's more important to me jan x Jan
A  Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 7:32 PM
hahhahahah yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy LOL... I love this short poem. Just like payday, goes and comes... Well, until next payday, let's see another one of these.... Cute by the way... Not what I expected. SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 4:35 AM
I did say it was short! It's the most important day of the month lol Jan xxxx
Smith Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Brought a smile to my face :)
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Pay Day makes me smile every month! hugs Jan x
Wilson Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:19 AM
Brilliant
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Simple but effective - many thanks for the lovely comment Jan x
Clark Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Best day of the week. Enjoy. Steve
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Many thanks for the comment ... the poem took ages to write :-: Jan x
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