The Shooter

The shooter from the train was sought
When police received a tip
And now it seems that he’s been caught;
To jail he’ll take a trip.

You’d think that in New York he’d find
So many spots to hide
Where he could leave no trace behind
With lots of time to bide.

Yet rarely someone in a scrape
(Or worse) evades the law
For each attempt at swift escape
Contains a fatal flaw.

New Yorkers now must heave a sigh
But not just of relief.
Despite the fact they caught the guy,
We’re filled with fear and grief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hankins Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 1:16 PM
For everyone who is caught, there's another one waiting in the wings, me thinks, Ilene.
Leffanta Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 11:11 AM
In Honolulu, police have just arrested a man for sneaking up behind an elderly Asian man on his morning walk, and setting his shirt on fire. The man suffered extensive burns, but the perpetrator was nabbed after a local priest recognised him as the individual who frequently set fire to his church. Get these nuts off the streets anyway possible!
Daniel Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 2:42 AM
Love the simple rhyme, Ilene, in India, a person get caught, then often released on bail, so the last line makes sense...
Wolf Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 3:57 PM
I agree, Ilene. You'd think these guys could disappear into NYC's vast populace. But like you said, there's that fatal flaw. One down -- how many hundreds or thousands to go? Just like on the old 'What's My Line?" ~ Subway Crime
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 3:49 PM
I guess I am not up with NY news, let alone my own local news. Good one, Ilene. did you hear that in china, a person can't even jaywalk but a camera will pick it up and have him identified in seconds by facial recognition. Their AF is off the charts and all the techno world is going that direction. Personally I hate this. The technology will be used in a wrong way undoubtedly.
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