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The Shoe Fits

I got me a special pair of walkers,
Tattered, torn, comfortable dockers,
Ain’t too easy on the eyes,
And wouldn‘t win a prize,
It’s the size fourteens that are the shockers.

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/11/2011 8:55:00 PM

Many congrats for this win Robert.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2011 10:59:00 PM

BIG congrats on this late win! Cool last line!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:27:00 PM

ROBERT ..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2011 1:27:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your winning entry..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2011 9:00:00 AM

Congrats Robert on a wonderful win in the Shoes contest with this excellent entry luv...

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/7/2011 8:30:00 AM

Congrats, Bob. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. All the best. Ralph

Skat A

Date: 11/6/2011 10:36:00 PM

ROBERT ~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/9/2011 2:04:00 PM

Witty and fun piece, Robert! There's something about worn shoes, we get very attached to them. Best to you, and if this is for a contest, hope you'll be a winner! God's blessings to you and yours, Mikki

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/12/2011 2:49:00 PM

Robert, I agree, that the most comfortable shoes are the ones that are worn and tatteed. lol Sounds like my nephews who stand 6'4" and 6' 3"! : ) Hope you have a good weekend and you and family are well. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2011 6:45:00 AM

Must be a tall man..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest.Thanks for stopping by with the encouraging comments..Sara

Samir Georges

Date: 2/9/2011 12:14:00 AM

I'm a thirteen, don't I know how it feels! You know, aside the fact that your little poem there had me grinning ear to ear, I sense the underlying message, subtly splayed across every word. No it "ain't too easy on the eyes" but if the shoe fits... well, it seems if we must be rugged and used in order to be at all, well that is a choice worth making, is it not my fellow poet?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/8/2011 10:04:00 AM

Got a good laugh from your limerick, Robert. Size 14? Wow, your feet are more than twice the size of mine. Funny last line. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn