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The Shock of Deep Revelations

Abstract hazel eyes, intensity in a disguise, sincerity inside a surprise- barren hands... whispering startling lies. When the time of death expires, do not fear, for even in the times of unknown speech sincere words can resound- I need not days of retribution, just moments of clarity. I fear not congruency, yet stumble upon cramped prisons, caught in the obscurity of an asylum. When the time of death transpires, I ask for peace of mind- for even in the most difficult minute, I shall fear nothing… except the shock of deep revelations. I wonder and ponder, creep and squander, and in the most astonishing breakthrough, I sense the fear amongst the hands that hold faces that stupefy and stun. When the time of death feeds my desires, amazement and bewilderment seep from my veins, like an intravenous needle prick- dripping down into oblivion. On the floor I fall with my hands over my face, wondering why I ever thought... I could be loved at all. Poems That Paint a Picture Silent One September 11, 2017

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Date: 9/13/2017 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on you win with this exceptional poem! :)
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:11:00 AM
Laura congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:26:00 AM
This is very deep Lulloo... well written and good take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:51:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Laura. And profound. Looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:17:00 AM
I will use some of your words in your poem to describe the glory of your write...it is astonishing and filled with amazement! I truly loved reading your astounding poem here this morning! What a perfectly grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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