The She He Saw

After school, they passed on the street
He stared, and walked into a pole
As he picked up his books, he swore
To see her again was his goal

He saw her through an open blind
(A misdemeanor I've been told!)
She's a magicians assistant
For that you would have to be bold!

For him it was quite upsetting,
The night he saw her sawed in half
Not to say that the trick went wrong,
But she disappeared after that!

No matter if he's on land or sea
Or on a seesaw for that matter
He wishes to see the she he saw
When first his books went a clatter!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/14/2019 9:33:00 AM
You are a mischievous one. Very entertaining. ;0)
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Date: 9/14/2019 6:49:00 PM
Well, I'll take that. I've certainly been called worse!......80)
Date: 8/16/2019 4:49:00 PM
Another grin worthy poem, thanks for making me smile-
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Date: 8/18/2019 9:26:00 AM
To me, there is nothing in this whole world more beautiful than a heartfelt smile!......Your comment made me smile as well!!!..........pat
Date: 8/10/2019 7:53:00 PM
G'day PAT … is she the woman with two half brothers and a half sister? Just curious - Lindsay
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Date: 8/12/2019 5:55:00 PM
Yep! That's what they were cut out for, to be a cut above the rest!............80)
Date: 8/10/2019 5:41:00 AM
Fun poem, Pat. Hope she is found.
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Date: 8/10/2019 7:48:00 AM
Yeah, she'll probably turn up somewhere, or maybe 2 places!?.....80)
Date: 8/9/2019 6:48:00 PM
what a fun poem Pat ... maybe not for the lass of course - bet she was a little sore or hacked off maybe at losing her job lol the final stanza is quite a tongue twister:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2019 7:46:00 AM
Hacked off! I love it. Hmmmm.......wish I would have put that in there!! LOL Thanks for commenting Jan!.....pat
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