The Shadows of the Rain

The Shadows of the Rain

To smile in the shadows of the rain;
As they enter as if passing through
Rooms familiar where they laughed and loved (and cried);
They mingled spirit to spirit 
Without numbers of days;
Where table after table filled the heart;
Where they met and blended only to part;
They took their lessons into the world of other souls
Where evening’s lights glow defining
The shadows of the rain.

In a whisper of a million words,
In perfect design or misshapen;
Fluttering pictures before a sitting solitary,
Drifting among the shadows of the rain.

Sun1ite 2/22/18

Looking out sliding windows on
A rainy twilight when the mists form nostalgic shadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 3:30 AM
I like the image you have created. The shadow of rain...Many wishes, Kai
Krutsinger Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:38 PM
I really liked the lines "They took their lessons into the world of other souls," and "in a whisper of a million words," I am picturing spirit here. Nicely written.
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:20 PM
A haunting read. Most enjoyable, Sunlite.
Thomas Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Sunlite this is a peaceful, beautiful piece.
One Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Wow this is deep, I found it sad, rather than happy... This would have been perfect for my contest.. I liked the use of vowels in this (assonance), I feel it gave the poem depth and the slower sound to it made it a lot more emotive...
Wanter Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:11 PM
So far I don't do contests - my ego couldn't take the rejection LOL. I'm glad you liked this, and I do appreciate constructive comments like yours.
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 12:45 PM
A beautiful verse Sunlite. Tom
Wanter Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thank you!
Ashley Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 12:41 PM
A beautifully expressed blend of emotions both melancholy and blissful. I just adore your line; 'In a whisper of a million words' - stunning and elegant! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Wanter Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thank you so much for your kind and descriptive comments.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 12:20 PM
- Give a sense of both happy and sad thoughts, a great writing Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:13 PM
You're a sweetheart. Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Charming write, Sunlite.
Wanter Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Thank you, thank you.
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