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your titian glow ebbs
     as you sail into the sea
          sunset now descends


~ ~ November 17th, 2015 ~~
Nayda's Sunset Haiku Contest

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Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 6:36:00 PM

The picture enhances the essence of your haiku, Lin! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

John Hamilton

Date: 11/25/2015 7:00:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win. JDH

Lin Lane
Date: 11/25/2015 9:07:00 PM

Thank you for reading it, John.

Lycia Harding

Date: 11/24/2015 11:28:00 PM

Love it! Congrats on your win, Lin. xoxo

Lin Lane
Date: 11/25/2015 2:29:00 AM

Thank you, Lycia.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 10:02:00 AM

glorious win. Congrats, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 10:12:00 AM

Thank you... ;)

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 3:58:00 AM

Congrats on your sunset win. SKAT

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 10:12:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, skat.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/24/2015 12:41:00 AM

Your haiku fuses so well with the photo.... Congrats for your #1 placement Lin! ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 2:19:00 AM

I appreciate your comment, Teddy.

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 11/23/2015 10:00:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Lin. Kudos, Bobby

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 2:18:00 AM

Thank you very much, Bobby.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2015 3:19:00 PM

Wow!!! This is excellent!!!! Congratulations on your win! Hugs dear friend

Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2015 2:17:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. Hugs back to you, my sweet.

John Lawless

Date: 11/23/2015 2:23:00 PM

beautifully done Lin...this is one of those poems that should be read with the eyes closed. ......

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 2:25:00 PM

Ok, John. Close your eyes and I'll begin...;) Thank you.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/23/2015 10:10:00 AM

Wonderful imagery, Lin! Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 11:33:00 AM

Your praise means a lot to me, Sandra. Thank you.

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2015 10:09:00 AM

Lovely visual, Lin. I wish I were there.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thank you, James. At the moment I wish I were too.

Beautiful Scars

Date: 11/23/2015 10:08:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win Lin~ *smiles*

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thanks, Laura, for the congrats and your smile.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/23/2015 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations in the placement of the contest Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 11:30:00 AM

Thank you very much, Nayda... and for hosting this contest.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/23/2015 9:08:00 AM

Glowin sunset! Congrats Lin! Balveen

Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 11:29:00 AM

Thank you, Balveen, for your kind words

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2015 6:21:00 PM

I've fallen in love with the imagery here... lin... Have a good one... Skat

Lin Lane
Date: 11/19/2015 6:30:00 PM

Thanks. Skat. I'm having fun finding the pictures that best suit the poems.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/18/2015 12:00:00 PM

Your poem glows, Lin! A lovely rendering of a captivating sunset. gl in the contest. // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2015 12:29:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind wishes, Paul ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2015 3:55:00 PM

I adore that middle line. Very unique!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2015 4:26:00 PM

Lots of thanks, Andrea!

Feli Elizab

Date: 11/17/2015 3:41:00 PM

Beautiful and vivid, Lin! Really enjoyed this one.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Felicia. ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2015 2:13:00 PM

- LOVELY !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for your nice comment, Anne Lise.

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/17/2015 12:09:00 PM

beautifully said

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thanks, Cas. Glad you like it.

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