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I've always lived in Iowa, she said, Thought I might leave when my husband died But I didn't have no where I could go And no money to get there. Iowa's as good a place as any, you know, Now, my grandchildren are here, Guess I'll stay close to them, But I don't see much of them these days They have their own lives to live. It's the same sad story everywhere you go. She throws a towel over her shoulder And hurries away toward the kitchen. written August 24, 2021

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Date: 8/25/2021 12:52:00 PM
So true. The world needs more compassion. Call someone from time to time. I miss many and don't have their numbers anymore. God bless your day... well written. Ann
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/25/2021 1:00:00 PM
Thanks so much for your encouraging and thoughtful comments, Ann. I appreciate you.
Date: 8/25/2021 9:23:00 AM
Well written Milton :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/25/2021 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compliment on my poem, Heidi.
Date: 8/24/2021 7:24:00 PM
Because of the depth of this story, Milton, which is incredibly insightful and is packed full of thought-provoking ideas, my sympathies go out to her in this difficult situation.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/24/2021 9:24:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtfulness, Lasaad.
Date: 8/24/2021 6:57:00 PM
Simple and yet, or I should say that's why the residue of the woman's feeling is left in me heavily...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/24/2021 9:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kohava Ray.
Date: 8/24/2021 6:09:00 PM
I've been a server, both at home and work. This is wonderfully insightful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/24/2021 9:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina. Yes, so many servers are trapped by circumstances.

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