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The Sequin Queen

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Written - 15th February 2024
There is a girl known as twinkle toes Who is dancing wherever she goes She’s the sequin queen Shines like a sunbeam Such a shame the girl sports a hook-nose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/2/2024 7:28:00 AM
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this is adorable. Could have been me when i was a little girl at my dance recitals. Hook nose and all
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David Fisher
Date: 2/23/2024 4:37:00 PM
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Good one with an unexpected ending! No one dances with the hook-nose queen, do they?
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2024 2:13:00 AM
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Ha! By hook or by crook maybe they would, who knows. Thanks David… Beryl
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 4:27:00 AM
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Cute one. Dr. Paul Nassif TV cosmetic surgeon could fix her right up. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/23/2024 11:49:00 AM
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Thanks Sara, will pass the info on. Pleased you enjoyed the read. Beryl
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/22/2024 9:08:00 AM
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Haha! Your last line is a witty surprise! A wonderful limerick, great imagery with a punchy last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/22/2024 12:29:00 PM
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Thank you very much Susan, pleased you found the last line witty. Warm wishes returned… Beryl
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/21/2024 9:26:00 AM
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Plastic surgery should be an option me thinks for her. Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/22/2024 12:27:00 PM
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So it would, thank you Jennifer. Hugs and blessings in return dear friend… Beryl
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Robert Schatz
Date: 2/21/2024 2:50:00 AM
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Love the last line! Poor thing...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2024 3:00:00 AM
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Thanks Robert, yes nice dancing, shame about the nose… Beryl
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/20/2024 12:51:00 PM
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The only thing I like more than hook noses are ski noses! All good, Robert
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2024 2:58:00 AM
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I wouldn’t turn my nose up at a ski nose, better that than one that grows, like Pinocchio’s. Thanks Robert… Beryl
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/15/2024 6:16:00 PM
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Very clever limerick my friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/15/2024 6:51:00 PM
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Thank you Jerry dear friend… Beryl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2024 2:16:00 AM
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- Sounds like a princess...but she should do something about her nose :) - Well done, Beryl :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/15/2024 2:27:00 AM
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Ha, so she should :) Thank you Anne-Lise, hugs sent back :) Beryl

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