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The Sequin Queen

There is a girl known as twinkle toes 
Who is dancing wherever she goes
She’s the sequin queen 
Shines like a sunbeam 
Such a shame the girl sports a hook-nose.

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2024

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2024 7:28:00 AM this is adorable. Could have been me when i was a little girl at my dance recitals. Hook nose and all Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 2/23/2024 4:37:00 PM Good one with an unexpected ending! No one dances with the hook-nose queen, do they? Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/24/2024 2:13:00 AM Ha! By hook or by crook maybe they would, who knows. Thanks David… Beryl

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/23/2024 4:27:00 AM Cute one. Dr. Paul Nassif TV cosmetic surgeon could fix her right up. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/23/2024 11:49:00 AM Thanks Sara, will pass the info on. Pleased you enjoyed the read. Beryl

Susan Ashley Date: 2/22/2024 9:08:00 AM Haha! Your last line is a witty surprise! A wonderful limerick, great imagery with a punchy last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/22/2024 12:29:00 PM Thank you very much Susan, pleased you found the last line witty. Warm wishes returned… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/21/2024 9:26:00 AM Plastic surgery should be an option me thinks for her. Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/22/2024 12:27:00 PM So it would, thank you Jennifer. Hugs and blessings in return dear friend… Beryl

Robert Schatz Date: 2/21/2024 2:50:00 AM Love the last line! Poor thing... Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/21/2024 3:00:00 AM Thanks Robert, yes nice dancing, shame about the nose… Beryl

Robert Gorelick Date: 2/20/2024 12:51:00 PM The only thing I like more than hook noses are ski noses! All good, Robert Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/21/2024 2:58:00 AM I wouldn’t turn my nose up at a ski nose, better that than one that grows, like Pinocchio’s. Thanks Robert… Beryl

Jerry Brotherton Date: 2/15/2024 6:16:00 PM Very clever limerick my friend. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/15/2024 6:51:00 PM Thank you Jerry dear friend… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2024 2:16:00 AM - Sounds like a princess...but she should do something about her nose :) - Well done, Beryl :) - hugs Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/15/2024 2:27:00 AM Ha, so she should :) Thank you Anne-Lise, hugs sent back :) Beryl