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The Seemingly Peaceful Lake

A lake,long,long like a rope. It shakes lightly from the effect of the breeze. It's seemingly peaceful like a sleeping suckling babe. Beside it,are greenish herbs and shrubs. Passersby stop to take a glimpse. The goose takes a peep, The feathery duckling never ceases to play on it. The other bird,dove and her likes, fly over it on their return home at dawn. Puppy lovers long to sit by it just after noon. It has its source from the lowly fount of the north, to the rocky edge of the south of the village. All love the long,long lake. December 28,2016.

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Date: 6/2/2018 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Adejumoke.
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Date: 5/19/2018 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 8/10/2017 8:06:00 AM
I live you poem very much. As you can see if you take a look at mines on the website, I like nature poems. Keep on, keeping on. Great poem up there with elites. I do like a long lake.
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