The Seeker, Otherwise the No God God

With Minuteness' you lived within me
Sustaining infinite thoughts, desires
I bestowed upon you all my experiences and
You knew many more from ages and species
Still to expand and further expand
Trying to diminish what you thought was wrong
Competing for more knowledge
Undeterred with the past, living with the present,
 Possibly with uncertainties of the future
Yet, looked upon with reverence & fear
And sometimes understood as an complex accident
 In apparent chaos, you had elements of regularity
And seem to move on in vastness and crave
For peace and peace and peace.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/7/2024 4:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Darren White

Date: 3/3/2017 5:37:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup with your very first poem. I think you will like it here, we are a very diverse group of poets, with very different backgrounds and styles. A wonderful first poem you have written, hoping for peace is what we most probably all wish.