The Seeker

I lived a life of a much awaited sinner Condemned a soul to a merciless rot Woke from a night less nightmare And walked a treacherous wrath An unending unknown battle resides To which a calm ripple rides A floating thirst once crawled To where a crumpling ladder now broke Hither I longed for thee All for naught I darst A fullsome I bequeath A fere I seek, shalt thou tarry?

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Neva Romaine

Date: 8/24/2015 1:36:00 PM

Hey Sarah, stopped by for a visit. This is a beautifully written piece. Great imagery and writing form. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva

Sarah Jabri
Date: 8/26/2015 4:50:00 AM

thank you for stopping by and for your wonderful words :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/24/2015 1:09:00 PM

temptation is hard to handle....just as your Beauty is the safest gamble....a sweet smile a sweet heart and a very sweet pen....that is just how I view you as we begin....;)

Sarah Jabri
Date: 8/26/2015 4:50:00 AM

hi Eric, so nice and sweet of you :)...thank you so much :)