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The Seed

How like the pumpkin you seem to me; arriving full-blown from the seed planted in my womb. You grew wild and free among the tamer fruits of life. I can still hear an echo of your laughter. Vines and tendrils wound about you in infancy long past. We were pulled apart by my growth and yours. I long for the blossoming days of infancy and childhood, for the wee small one who never failed to make me smile, for the adult who sprang Jack-o-lantern whole into a world of normalcy refusing to accept the mundane. Can you not see me? Did you not know me? Was I never the gardener to you? The garden now lies, overrun by last years Halloween's delights, allowed to run their course, and in doing so trampling the ripe tomatoes, and green bell peppers as you do, my heart, by forgetting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2014 9:02:00 PM
Debbie,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/5/2014 5:50:00 PM
Hey Debbie; congratulations on your poem being featured this week... somber but loving...one thing is sure though....with the love you so sweetly express...they always come back.....Neva
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Date: 8/5/2014 3:36:00 PM
You might as well be a vegetable, eh, Debbie? Enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:37:00 PM
Debbie, this is so sad and unfortunately happens too often.... Beautifully writing from the heart, dear.. Big hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 8/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
Touching melancholy poem. Sometimes as children we fail to see the effect we have. Sometimes as parents we have to grin and bear it but it's never easy. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/5/2009 9:59:00 AM
excellent compostion of feelings every mother can relate with. Deborah you have beautifuly reflected the longing and love of a mother evidencing her growing child. Thanks and many thanks for your invaluable comments. cheers
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:47:00 PM
as much as I think the subject is your own child,I'd like to believe,for my own personal reasons really,that this poem is from the point of view of your own mother, as my strongest impression of you has to be a 'fruit grown wild and free among the tamer fruits of life' especially since you were exposed to pre-feminist America with the tame housewives in the kitchen and all the bs. but like I said Deb, I tend to project myself very heavily into other people's work. please forgive if I intruded...
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Date: 8/3/2009 3:40:00 AM
Very heartfelt write. I think it has a lot more meaning than we may ever know. Great write.
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Date: 8/2/2009 4:29:00 PM
Wow...this poem touched me deeply, Deborah....I have 2 sons and a daughter....and I can feel the loss, regret, and pain in having one grow so far from the "garden" where they were planted, the metaphor was so gripping from this mother's eye and heart.....I feel the pain. Excellent writing....terribly terribly sad. ps.....soup mail
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Date: 8/2/2009 11:27:00 AM
I can relate to this write..you have said it all so beautifully..this goes to my favs. BG
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Date: 8/2/2009 10:55:00 AM
A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2009 5:17:00 AM
Beautiful poem Deborah, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 8/1/2009 8:31:00 PM
NICE......So I have been invited to a Limerick game??? Hmmmmm, stay tuned mine will be posted in a few minutes....In the meantime, AWESOME write Deborah keep it up...........:JP}
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:44:00 PM
Excellent imagery here. I'm not one to go overboard for motherhood stuff but I like the way that you have created this without any of the preachy preachy stuff, which is much of what goes on with English poetesses.. You allow the reader to respond in their own way and as such you get on with the poem.
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:01:00 PM
Debby, Am I to interrupt, the babe walks on toes, and the adult walks on the heart! Lol! Hugs, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2009 10:16:00 PM
Precious memories, Deb,...beautifully written, filled with a Mother's Love, so special and unique, you invite the reader to feel your love, your gift of poetry is a Blessing to us all, love, james
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Date: 7/31/2009 8:20:00 PM
sad but beautifully written , this one touched me , great job
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