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he grew up like anyone else he was just the same except he was blest to know the name of the black and white seabird with the blubber layer and when that bird went down he said a prayer there was no sound none that anyone could hear but he felt the Secret Penguin's presence near it's true that waddling wonder was never found that polar pirate had gone underground not to swim with the whales, sharks and fishes but to continue to fulfill children's wishes those who had expected to see the last of him had been reduced to so much chum smarter than any other kind of waterfowl he was wiser than a great horned owl the world would see his vengeance reign the Secret Penguin was back again

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Date: 3/30/2025 2:37:00 PM
I'm delighted to see your winning work in Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 3/30/2025 6:30:00 AM
This is so unique and out of the box! I love this! And your an artist too?! Wow xxoo
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks Crystol! My son invented the Secret Penguin. I only interpret him in poems - lol! Hilda said I should have a picture of him, so that's what I came up with :-)
Date: 3/29/2025 7:23:00 AM
The child in me giggled and delighted in this one my friend Dave. Congratulations! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks elle!
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks elle!
Date: 3/27/2025 5:06:00 PM
I like your poem. It would bloom if it could have some penguin cartoons added. But it's great as it is. Poetry at its best.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/28/2025 8:14:00 PM
I love your drawing. The penguin is cute.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/28/2025 7:50:00 PM
Not too happy with it, but the Secret Penguin has a picture now.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/27/2025 5:21:00 PM
Good idea! In the next week or so, I'll try to draw up a picture of The Secret Penguin, and post it on top of the poem.
Date: 3/27/2025 7:20:00 AM
- I enjoy your lovely poem, David :) - Perfect for children to read - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/27/2025 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! I think I enjoy writing children type poems best.
Date: 3/26/2025 7:00:00 PM
I too was taken in by your secret penguin a good read
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David Crandall
Date: 3/26/2025 7:06:00 PM
Thanks William!
Date: 3/26/2025 12:01:00 PM
Hi David, that was a lovely story, long live the secret penguin.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/26/2025 12:21:00 PM
Haha, it's great to know the secret penguin has a fan!

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