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he grew up like anyone else
he was just the same 
except
he was blest
to know the name 
of the black and white seabird
with the blubber layer 
and when that bird went down
he said a prayer

there was no sound
none
that anyone could hear 
but
he felt the Secret Penguin's presence near
it's true
that waddling wonder was never found
that polar pirate
had gone underground 

not to swim with the whales, sharks and fishes 
but to continue to fulfill
children's wishes
those who had expected to see the last of him
had been reduced to so much
chum

smarter
than any other kind of waterfowl
he was wiser
than a great horned owl
the world
would see his vengeance reign
the Secret Penguin
was back again

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Date: 3/30/2025 2:37:00 PM
I'm delighted to see your winning work in Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 3/30/2025 6:30:00 AM
This is so unique and out of the box! I love this! And your an artist too?! Wow xxoo
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks Crystol! My son invented the Secret Penguin. I only interpret him in poems - lol! Hilda said I should have a picture of him, so that's what I came up with :-)
Date: 3/29/2025 7:23:00 AM
The child in me giggled and delighted in this one my friend Dave. Congratulations! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks elle!
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David Crandall
Date: 3/30/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks elle!
Date: 3/27/2025 5:06:00 PM
I like your poem. It would bloom if it could have some penguin cartoons added. But it's great as it is. Poetry at its best.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/28/2025 8:14:00 PM
I love your drawing. The penguin is cute.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/28/2025 7:50:00 PM
Not too happy with it, but the Secret Penguin has a picture now.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/27/2025 5:21:00 PM
Good idea! In the next week or so, I'll try to draw up a picture of The Secret Penguin, and post it on top of the poem.
Date: 3/27/2025 7:20:00 AM
- I enjoy your lovely poem, David :) - Perfect for children to read - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/27/2025 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! I think I enjoy writing children type poems best.
Date: 3/26/2025 7:00:00 PM
I too was taken in by your secret penguin a good read
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David Crandall
Date: 3/26/2025 7:06:00 PM
Thanks William!
Date: 3/26/2025 12:01:00 PM
Hi David, that was a lovely story, long live the secret penguin.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/26/2025 12:21:00 PM
Haha, it's great to know the secret penguin has a fan!

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