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The Second Chance

A slice of morning

Last evening offered me nice

Bunch of silken buds

As I could not get my vase

The poem couldn’t be written



This morning I was 

Prepared with a crimson pot

For a second chance

She came with a white lily

No more mistakes so silly
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01/092016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/5/2016 12:32:00 PM
We all are so glad for the second chance we get to write it down. Nice little write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/7/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/2/2016 6:51:00 AM
I love the meaning meant in your poem and delivered in such clever metaphors - so creative this one! CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/2/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for getting into the images ...
Date: 9/1/2016 10:02:00 AM
Good write, Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/2/2016 12:41:00 AM
Thank you ...

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