The Seasons When Change

Autumn much gentler
When ends, ends biting winter,
And comes when the spring,
Warm weather along to bring,
How do waters know to stir?
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Tanka |28.05.2021|

Poet’s notes: A picture of snow-capped mountain peaks, below which a green thicket and a meadow, and at the bottom flows bestirred waters now that winter is over and spring is on the way. And this question arises in my mind in the form of this Tanka.
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Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Lovely, and I like that question in end line
Bangalee Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 3:41 AM
Beautiful that is; just like it
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