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The Season of Truth

A cold wind. Whatever was here has fled inside or has curled up in a corner somewhere out of sight and gone to sleep. Footpaths are tiled in the wet, skeletal remains of leaves and tree trunks have begun to wear their gray winter coat of lichen. There is an honesty in the landscape, the scaffolding that holds form together is no longer concealed by a camouflage of color, the eye is confronted by what lies beneath. Cover withers away to bare ground, the earth takes breath, bathes in the chilly glow of a winter sun. I also come to this place, to this stark season of truth and see myself stripped back to the bones and sinews of me. The wind blows through the same vacant spaces, unpicks the pretense to let a cold light shine through. I don't like what I see.

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Date: 6/24/2024 8:06:00 PM
'There is an honesty in the landscape' -- my favorite line among many others in this write of bludgeoning integrity. ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/7/2024 6:16:00 AM
ah, the torment of "the unexamined life" being examined
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/14/2024 9:06:00 PM
Quick dip then out of this space if I could manage it....
Date: 6/7/2024 4:52:00 AM
Self examination? Looking under the hood? Strip away the masks and the facades and what are we deep down? What is life about really? Good to ponder and occasionally conduct an honest self-assessment. Nice poem Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/14/2024 9:03:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Tom. Probably healthy to subject oneself to examination at times providing it doesn't spill into excess and imbalance. A challenge sometimes....take care, Paul
Date: 6/7/2024 4:02:00 AM
If only we could be blessed not with extreme self awareness or self assessment but how we are viewed through others eyes. We are not one dimensional, all good or all bad. What beauty we'd see if our own self image was cast aside and the views of others (particularly those who we hold in high regard) could be let in. I have felt nothing but light from you Paul and I'm nobody's fool x
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/14/2024 9:00:00 PM
Sound advice DD. We seem always inclined to be so persuaded by negativity at times and avoid the positive and reassuring support if others. The challenge it to maintain a balance. Thankyou my dear friend for your wonderful comments....

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